Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

The story premise has a tried and true platform, but the story itself jumps off that platform and gives the same feeling as free falling into the unknown. the pacing seems rushed and jumps a bit. I find myself saying, "Uh, what?" almost every chapter I read. I read to the pay wall to give a benefit of the doubt but decided to stop at the wall.

Apocalypse I can Synthesis Anything

Sci-fi · Chaos_Gray

Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

5mth

Commented

this chapter is 2 paragraphs repeated over and over in different ways. "He kept looking to look at what he was looking at because he wanted to look at it."

ch 208 Swallowing Medicine; Completely Opening the Pill Saint's Secret Realm

Sharing Tamed Beasts' Talents for Eternal Life

Eastern · A Little Immortal

Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

5mth

Posted

good writing and development. the story was on a decent path but after the doom arc it takes a left and has the feel of rush to finish.

MMORPG: I was BUGGED

Games · MiuNovels

Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

5mth

Posted

Popped up on my free read but this was well written. has some of the tropes you see but not over done. The MC has a relatable vibe and he's not OP, just smart.

Re: Apocalypse Game

Games · Avan

Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

6mth

Posted

The intermittent Olde English is a fun touch and taking a break on the back stroke of a face slap is like a mid season cliff hanger of a canceled TV show.

Leveling Up With My Pet

Fantasy · Akiii365

Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

6mth

Commented

this sounds like "we would like to speak with you about your maintenance contract"

ch 264 A Song Of Fire and Ice [Part 2]

Strongest Warlock - Wizard World Irregular

Fantasy · Elyon

Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

6mth

Commented

so, we hang a left here aaaaand we're off

ch 59 Interrogation

The Evolution of Genius: Every Night, I Get Smarter!

Urban · WorldScholar

Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

6mth

Commented

At first I thought it was filler gibberish for the pillar but then, boom, spanish

ch 890 Chapter 890: A New Day, a New Beginning. 2

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

Fantasy · Victor_Weismann

Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

7mth

Posted

The novel has some potential but the chapter uploads are mismatched and duplicates at around 180s...

Alter Dimension: Lucky Dungeon Master

Fantasy · YouthGod

Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

7mth

Commented

Whats with the repeat chapters, the rest of the chapters are all repeats...

ch 168 Synthesizing Skills!

Alter Dimension: Lucky Dungeon Master

Fantasy · YouthGod

Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

7mth

Posted

A worthwhile read. The story progresses rather well, the world building is slowly introduced thru the chapters, and tbr character development is solid for the main characters but leave something to desire for the minor ones at this point.

Miracle Card Shop: All My Cards Can Be Actualize

Urban · RavenClaw471

Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

7mth

Posted

The MC can't catch a break... it is one uphill struggle after another after another. I kept reading to see if there's some calm, nope

The Abandoned Husband Dominates

Urban · I Have Something To Say

Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

7mth

Posted

Interesting and one of my favorite novels thus far. The development of the characters and overall power structure are steady and fast pace. When the MC gets too powerful there is something that he has to figure out or overcome. The overarching "bad guy" still making plans but we only catch the occasional glimpse.

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

Fantasy · Victor_Weismann

Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

7mth

Posted

The character development and "future" plot hints are pretty well written. The future hints come as brief side stories or a "meanwhile elsewhere" type of paragraph. The world background is sometimes glossed over but not to the point that it takes from the story. Some fight scenes take a few chapters and some power upgrades are a few day time skip. I look forward to future chapters of the novel.

The Soul System in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Alan_Wafula

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