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I’m not sure I think it’s the third or second chapter

Yeah w t f

How stupid can you guys be? What he did was perfectly logical. Because this is not a transmigrated it’s a rebirth can you build a life family not only that but he only had three days and he managed to get a lot of things in case basically be prepared as best as he could go to an island a prison, or whatever, he only had three days. How was he supposed to get there and if it’s a present there is a lot of criminals in there what is he supposed to do fight them with a shotgun? Honestly ridiculous don’t comment if you don’t know what you’re doing or saying this is honestly ridiculous and annoying because I actually like the story if you ignore certain things like the cough cough you know I mean seriously, it’s barely 14 man at least make him older like to know me by 16 or 17 this honestly makes me curious like a boy is the age, you know I don’t wanna say it’s not just because you know but because it’s kind of makes me uncomfortable whenever I’m getting off topic that’s all thank you

I love this story, but there’s a problem. I wish that you take out the Haram. I don’t really like her aunt and I love the ship, between him and the first girl SIF I feel like from SIF, actual character from the movies, and the stories, it feels like she wouldn’t want to share him and the OC it feels like he loves SIF and no girls is really in his mind other than her so you can see glimpses here and there, but I feel like he should stay with SIF. Only her and the other characters can be like no part of the family, but they’re not his lover. I don’t know, I just hate it I hate the Haram, the story in a bit self is good, but I feel like it’s ruining it. I know it’s a lot to ask but can you please please take out the Haram I really love the story I really do but the home is giving me the Grinch and every time it’s mention in the story you know like on the silly mentioned about anyway, that you see that all they really want him and they were like oh I’m gonna have no matter what and they’re like okay like I don’t mind sharing in stuff just not good, I hate it. I’m glad that the story does not focus necessarily on romance and instead it’s about the development which makes the story amazing by the way, but please take out the Haram trust me and said I don’t to make it so the girls and said both of his I don’t know like pantheon and family like sisters or something it would be much better if you ask me I’m sorry I’m babbling it is that I love the story so much and I love the OC it’s just not doing it for me please please take it out and I’m sorry if I wrote a few things wrong English is not my first language

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Yes please continue I love the idea so much it’s very interesting and exciting