Dude, what the heck? The spelling is so bad, the grammar is awful, and almost every sentence feels like a five-year-old wrote this. Please fix this for your own good. Maybe use Grammarly or ChatGPT. I would suggest ChatGPT
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I don't really care much for the system, even though it annoys me. However, I would suggest that you rewrite the chapters. I would enjoy this book very much because English is my third language, but the one I've spoken most in my life. It hurts my head reading the first few chapters."
The only uncomfortable thing is his age, but there will be a time skip, so I'll just keep reading.
ch 0 8 Chapter 8: Another Transfer Student & Chance Encounters
Anime & Comics · Luigi_Lightning
Alright, I'll keep reading. Thanks for clarifying it for me. <3
ch 0 8 Chapter 8: Another Transfer Student & Chance Encounters
Anime & Comics · Luigi_Lightning
Yeah, I understand, but he's 9 years old. It feels weird reading it. I didn't read those chapters because I didn't want spoilers, so I never read them. Are you a pedo for writing about a 9-year-old collecting female leads left and right? It should feel off to you as an adult. Sorry, I mean no disrespect; I'm just pointing it out. It's not that I'm saying you are one.
ch 0 8 Chapter 8: Another Transfer Student & Chance Encounters
Anime & Comics · Luigi_Lightning
This is stupid. He's going after every girl like they're Pokémon. This story was fun at first, but reading about a 9-year-old going after every girl he meets is kind of stupid. I know this is wish fulfillment, but this is just ridiculous, don't you think, author?
ch 0 8 Chapter 8: Another Transfer Student & Chance Encounters
Anime & Comics · Luigi_Lightning
I'll be honest: the premise of this fanfic is good, but the overall story is bad. It almost feels like an AI wrote the entire thing. I wouldn't mind if the AI was good, but as I read, it uses so many unnecessary words that make me wonder if there was any human touch at all. Every word is predictable, and there is too much unnecessary detail. Sometimes, the author (or the AI) repeats themselves, which is frustrating. And now, they want us to pay to read AI-written work.
Game of Thrones: Lord of the Seven Seas
Book&Literature · Axel_wheel