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You mean my review? Also, why are you still here lmao. It’s been 3 months.

Makes my head hurt. Seems like this author has a tendency to over explain, which also causes a lot of repetitiveness. In the first chapter alone, there’s a mind reading ROB that keeps repeating the same things over and over. For example, some girl chose to reincarnate as Frieren, and the ROB a paragraph later goes “she’s the first person to choose a different race” like bruh we got that already you don’t have to say that again. Happens again when mc picks his class as well, the ROB goes “the outcast is a weak class but it’s good if they know how to use it” and the mc parrots that a paragraph later. Even if you don’t know how to show not tell, at least stop repeating what you told over and over again. Also please stop using italics. The more you bold or italicize something the less impact it has. There’s no need for the fancy stuff, it only makes it worse if you don’t know how to use it. If normal words are good enough for real authors, it’s probably good enough for you.

“It feels like”? If you can’t come up with an actual counterpoint for why this fic is good, I’m gonna stop arguing. You can keep riding the author if u want. Still bad fic.

Character development? Usually you learn something about the character and the plot progresses a bit. This is 26 chapters, a lot can happen. He’s still the same generic character as he is in chapter one, and we learn nothing about him except his personality is cardboard

He set nothing up. All he does is info dumps the system and tells us how the company was founded. There’s no showing, only telling. Also tell me what else is good about the fic besides the plot if it’s so good.

Or you can try searching marvel in the search bar and half of those that come up will be better or as good as this

No spacing between paragraphs at all. Every chapter is legit a word wall. Also there’s tons of spelling mistakes and the font changed in the middle of a chapter for some reason. Pretty much unreadable

If it’s so good, how come the top reviews are all one stars? I think you’re the one exaggerating how good it is.

What plot? All he did is set up his company. From the 26 chapters I’ve read, barely anything happened. If you want a good marvel fic, I liked A Silent Mad Dog, but it’s also not that hard to find a marvel fic that has readable grammar.

There are also a whole lot better.

It’s not, especially if you’re comparing to other mcu fics unless you’re comparing it to mtl. The grammar is abominable but I know the author edited it so it might be actually readable now compared to when I read it. Still bad tho.

Ay but at least a few more people probably didn’t have to suffer like I did. You’re welcome

A retard would be someone who’s still reading this book, cause my braincells almost died from reading the first 26 chaptera

Well if you don’t want someone to judge your work you could just not post it. You said you were writing this for fun after all. The comment about this reading like a crack fic was mostly a response to another review that said your grammar was good, which I disagree with. Secondly, I said nothing about your mc hiding his power. Rather, I’m saying your mc doesn’t demonstrate any traits of a 12th dimensional being thereby ruining your concept. I don’t think you understand the 12th dimension at all, since anything at the 12th dimension could probably destroy and rebuild the world with a subconscious thought while sleeping. It would’ve been understandable if you nerfed him but as of right now, your mc is literally just a flerken and that’s not what I’m here for.

Nice concept but it reads like a crack fic. Also the mc is generic af, basically ur average human in a 12th dimensional cat but I don’t think the author really knows what he’s talking about with his whole 12th dimensional thing so for now he’s just a cat with shadow powers. Average Dxd wishfulment fic so far.

The grammar sucks. The author uses like 2 commas per chapter, so over half of his sentences are run ons and there’s a weird use of exclamation marks. Also, it’s straight up boring so far. I would argue the mc has no personality except for wanting to survive. Half of every chapter is filled with author’s notes (also annoying), one at the top and and one at the bottom so there’s really not that much plot in 26 chapters.