BossJohnny

after reading for sometime i can say that this novel is gold but it has it's fair share of problems for one thing in every chapter that I've read you seam to have a fetish for the Word "the young" since you put it in every instance Were the mc is or using it to describe a young person it's gets very annoying at some point you really should tone it down a notch other than that I've been enjoying reading your novel. you still got to tone it down With the Word "The Young" I don't know Why you have to describe Minos as "the young" him being young doesn't really matter in the grand scheme of the story cause eventually you'll have to stop using the Word "the young" since Minos Wont stay young forever

i'm not really good at giving reviews but in short this novel is gold it's just that recent chapters have been pathetically short i've read novels where the 2 chapter have decent amount of words per chapter and what's with the word spacing as if deliberatly wanting to make it look long each wasted space could have an added sentence in them like bruh don't be lazy your novel is a masterpiece in the making don't ruin it

your complaint is valid but kingdom building was already hinted just at the title itself the mc would be the magi king but one can't be a king unless he has subjects to rule or at the very least to be considered the magi king there has to be other magi besides him for him to be one day the magi king otherwise it just might be an empty title i do like kingdom building though there too little novel like that and their hard to find

hands down one of the best novels i've read and i've only read 2 others with the same premise as this the 2 other being azimuth the elden throne and vrmmorpg dragomancer reborn i've very picky with the novel's i read if the first 100 chapters can't get my attention i won't even bother continueing to read it story is good nothing revolutionary but it doesn't have to be to enjoy a good novel grammar is good and character development is also good even side characters aren't just there for show though it aint perfect nothing is perfect i've always kept that in mind that author's are humans and they will make mistakes but that shouldn't top us from enjoying this novel overall this is about 8.5/10

is this novel dead or what last time i read the author stopped updating for months then updated again then stopped updating again and it's been 3 months did the author die or what

hey author are there gonna be humans or is it purely creatures of the forest

hey author do you have a discord channel

after reading till the latest chapter i can say for sure that this is worth the read once you reach chapter 120 were things are finally starting to get fire the grammar is good haven't seen any errors and everything can be understood the world building is good can't get enought and would love to read more if i could travel throught time to when the novel is done so i could binge read it

does this havea discord channel

it's gonna be better than tos author himself confessed that he got carried away with the harem part of the story this novel will onyl have 2 or 3 harem members each with a important place in his empire just like how the women in tos had each thier place in the mc's empire or at least the major ones