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but he couldn't use his chakra in that domain ... or did that goddess help him?

Simple: just genderbent Jair and add the blood related OC as the MC

The Yandere was a real turn off the way you've written her imo. Nothing against dom/sub play but scarring is a step to far imo.

Dude - even in Naruto, there are fast acting and deadly kinds of poison. Sakura was prepared against Sasori because Chiho is Sasoris grandma & teacher, and they created an antidote beforehand, and Sasori played with his prey (because of Chiho). He could have easily killed Kankuro beforehand, but due to arrogance and nostalgia, he didn't - which led to Sakura developing an antidote beforehand. Sasori knows almost every poison available, and he could easily create one specialized in killing someone with a Sage body (so could Orochimaru, Tsunade and Kabuto). And finally, a Sage-body doesn't make you immune against poison - it might make you more resistant against a few but not against every kind. And there are all sorts of different acting poison available. Fast acting, painless, tasteless, paralizing, etc. There's a reason why Sasori was feared as much as he was, but he also had a vast spy network with sleeper agents everywhere. I bet before he died, he already infiltrated every village with sleeper agents in high positions. He alone could have prevented Natsuos rise to power by simply activating one at the order of Tobi, who is notoriously paranoid and would have eliminated a potential threat like another surviving Uchiha.

Your point being? I criticize her for being stupid as one of the few people who should still be capable of killing Natsuo but is instead reduced to this. I was extremely annoyed by this point and quit after writing that comment, but I was still capable of reading a few lines further - something you apparently couldn't do with my comment.

ok, so he just trusts the guy he met that day.

That's laughably stupid. You're thinking with dragon ball logic in a world where fighting unfair is key. With the right strategy and intel, most of canon Akatsuki could kill him. However, you're also right in a sense since they're all nerfed in this fic - especially intellectually - so you could just say that no one could kill Natsuo.

Oh, he can regenerate... that must mean he's immune to poison - that's definitely a reach. There's a reason Sasori was feared the way he was because no matter what abilities you have, you're not immune to every poison and very few besides exactly Tsunade or Sakura/Chiho would stand a chance of survival if they were poisoned. People like Kabuto and Orochimaru should definitely know that. But sure, poison is apparently meaningless in the world of Naruto.

Since you apparently follow my every comment on this fic only this much: Natsuo is progressively needlessly revealing his powers, goals and potential weaknesses because he's careless, dumb and never gets to pay for any of his mistakes because nobody else around him is acting logical - especially those with the power who have/had the power to stop him. If you don't see this, then good for you since this means you're able to suffer through way more than me because i quit reading this quite a while ago.

Guns existed for a few hundred years already, so it would be quite probable that wizards created countermeasures, especially Voldemort, who grew up in the muggle world and is obsessed with not dying. When Fred and George can create clothes that protect against minor curses, then its highly likely that wizards created bulletproof magical clothes. However all of this only helps if you're AWARE of the threat guns could possess. Therefore DEs could be caught on the wrong foot - Voldemort most likely not so much.

Sakura always had great chakra control due to her low reserves so control would probably be the least of her concerns. Her focus was most likely on building her body up after she wasted her time with diets and swooning over Sasuke. And Tsunade is definitely the best teacher any of her team had because Tsunade was actually teaching her without an ulterior motive. Orochimaru probably taught Sasuke barely enough for Sasuke to not throw a hissy fit because he was after his body and not to actually make him stronger than Itachi. Jiraya and Kakashi were awful teachers and Naruto showed that with the development of the rasen shuriken. Naruto with someone barely trying to teach him and explaining stuff always overperforms . Sakura witnessed what chakra strings could do while having OP chakra control but did nothing with it. She's just a copy of her teacher

And that's probably how Orochimaru felt about the Uchiha in general

Why let Obito get strong in the first place? He and his group are already strong enough to flatten the whole elemental nations with enough prep! The only reason for him to let all of this happen is nostalgia for canon.

Canon is already f*cked so why bother letting it get away?

This is ridiculous. If she was too young for the war, she would have been protected inside the village because they wouldn't risk her going berserk. If she was already in the war, she would have been along people keeping an eye on and indoctrinating her who definitely wouldn't want to risk her fleeing. And raping a jinchuriki makes no sense whatsoever. Every jinchuriki could defend itself with a chakra cloak in canon when they had emotional stress even if they weren't "perfect". Bullying etc makes sense but not physical trauma as Narutos case showed but even that would be risky as Gaaras case showed.

yeah that makes no sense. First of all she's a jinshuriki so risk of rampage. Second kuma was established to be the kid-friendliest village in this fic. Third even if its an initiation ritual it wouldn't be a regular thing as described in this passage. 4th as a jinchuriki she wouldn't need that "ritual" as she's more than capable of defending herself even if she's not a perfect jinchuriki yet. 5th she definitely wouldn't be used for seduction missions. 6th jinchurikis get spied on 24/7 so it couldn't have happened because of a Danzo equivalent of Kumo in the background for the Naruto treatment + once again point 2.

Morgana, McG, Hermione and Bellatrix beg to differ. In canon there's no such thing as more mana or more power. There's only skill, experience, knowledge, luck, control, emotion and the elder wand differentiating the outcome of a fair fight. None of those aspects are gender related.

Well, why tell it in the first place? There's literally no reason to mention it besides flexing!