Webnovel Author: Eien_Warui - Novel Collection

Would you mind to read my book?

Hi there, Author-Nim. After reading the first volume of this book, I give this book a 3,8 review. Here I explain why. 1) Writing Quality This book has a lot of typos and grammatical errors just as the author has explained. I can understand that because my native language is not English. However, the number of words for each chapter is inconsistent. I found out some chapters were short, and some were a bit long. 2) Story Development The pace of the story is kinda slow at some points and made me feel bored. However, the story itself is pretty good even though some parts kinda confusing without any explanation. 3) Character Design The character description is pretty decent I guess? But I think you forgot to explain what Alex looks like. 4) Updating Stability It's good to know if you keep updating every day, but the time is kinda random. I can understand that after I read your first Auxiliary chapter. 5) World Background Kinda vague in my mind since you said that there are three worlds in this book, but I started to understand it the more I read. I hope you do better next time. - Eien Warui.