HolyDiver

LV 5

You can see its stripes but you know he's clean

2017-11-24 đã tham gia Global
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HolyDiver
HolyDiver
2 years ago
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The premise was pretty interesting. The story was definitely enough to get me hooked and wanting more. However, the writing was simply atrocious. I have no idea if it's a translation issue or the author is ESL and is still learning English. Having an editor would help this novel a lot. Or perhaps even some kind of writing assistant to check for grammar and spelling.