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ch 0 8 Ch-7:Parting
Eastern · Hardy1j
It's because she is not ordinary that they want to keep her in the family, and also why they asked her opinion on the matter.
ch 86 Chapter 83: In this life, never compete with him!
Eastern · Let me laugh
It's somewhat difficult to understand some of these paragraphs. Just to be clear, the MC is from our world but reincarnated into an alternate Earth. Is that correct?
ch 0 8 Humans suffering setbacks in their deep space exploration
Eastern · Aurora_Ryan
Isn't this the same guy who was killed by Yumo in the first few chapters?But that makes no sense, since Yumo only got her body recently. What's happening here??
ch 424 Chapter 424: The Past 1/5 [4/??]
Fantasy · Hail_The_loli
This all seems to forced. The Marquess and Ria already knew it was a Deathtrap. Couple chapters ago, the Marquess even stated that she has her own backup plans for the safety of the children. I don't see how the author is going to explain the lack of protection in such an obvious trap scenario.
ch 274 Chapter 273: Gone
Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu
Did the author forget about Kats reserved points, or was this plot induced stupidity? Was she saving the points for after she dies?
ch 130 Chapter 129: Lord Pele (3)
Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu
Seems very forced. Especially with Fay, considering she was the one who cut off Amie. Even with the previous incident with Amies bf, Fay was completely uninvolved. Author should have written more interactions involving Fay and Amie to not make this look so forced.
ch 347 Everyday was a learning lesson II
Urban · BAJJ
Just got done reading the 49 chapter prolouge and decided to write this review before starting the real story. I'm not going to comment much on the grammar and sentence structuring, as the author does gradually improve further down the line. The first 15 chapters might have been some of the worst that I have read on Webnovel. It's filled with a copious amount of info dump that's written in a report format, making the read an absolute chore. I'm not sure what the author was thinking, but there are probably less than 2-3 character dialogs in each chapter, with most of it being a summary of mundane and irrelevant events. Chapter 16 onwards, the story gets a bit more interesting, and we finally get some character interactions. There is still an abundance of unnecessary info dump. However, the main character does get a lot more focus. 30 chapters into the story, and it finally feels like the author has upgraded his writing style. You also see a significant improvement in his grammar and sentence structuring. The story starts to feel more alive, and it no longer feels like a chore to read each chapter. There are still some plot holes, but it's negligible as this is just a prolouge. This does make me look forward to the future chapters after his regression, and my expectations are still relatively high for now.
The Villain Returns!
Eastern · Hardy1j