/ 奇幻 / A man in the Crownlands
摘要
A story of a modern man put into the world of asoiaf before the conquest and the iron throne is made follow his journey of man you wouldn't usually cheer as a hero
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3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
ᴡᴏᴡ, ɪ’ᴍ ꜱᴏ ɢʟᴀᴅ ɪ ꜱᴛᴜᴍʙʟᴇᴅ ᴜᴘᴏɴ ᴛʜɪꜱ! ᴛʜᴇ ᴘʀᴇᴍɪꜱᴇ ʜᴏᴏᴋᴇᴅ ᴍᴇ, ʙᴜᴛ ᴛʜᴇ ᴇxᴇᴄᴜᴛɪᴏɴ ɪꜱ ᴡʜᴀᴛ'ꜱ ᴋᴇᴇᴘɪɴɢ ᴍᴇ ʜᴇʀᴇ. ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴡʀɪᴛɪɴɢ ꜱᴛʏʟᴇ ɪꜱ ꜱᴏ ꜱᴍᴏᴏᴛʜ ᴀɴᴅ ᴇᴀꜱʏ ᴛᴏ ʀᴇᴀᴅ, ᴇᴠᴇɴ ᴡʜᴇɴ ᴛᴀᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴄᴏᴍᴘʟᴇx ᴛʜᴇᴍᴇꜱ. ɪ'ᴍ ɪᴍᴘʀᴇꜱꜱᴇᴅ ʙʏ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴅᴇᴅɪᴄᴀᴛɪᴏɴ ᴛᴏ ᴛʜᴇ ꜱᴇʀɪᴇꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ᴛʜᴇ Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ ᴏꜰ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴜᴘᴅᴀᴛᴇꜱ. ᴛʜɪꜱ ɪꜱ ᴀʙꜱᴏʟᴜᴛᴇʟʏ ɢᴏɪɴɢ ɪɴᴛᴏ ᴍʏ 'ʙᴇꜱᴛ ᴏꜰ' ʟɪꜱᴛ. ᴘʟᴇᴀꜱᴇ, ᴋᴇᴇᴘ ᴅᴏɪɴɢ ᴡʜᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜ’ʀᴇ ᴅᴏɪɴɢ!"
Hi, I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your story. It had this energy that really stood out to me. You have a writing style that feels naturally suited for a visual medium like a comic or webtoon. I’m a professional artist who takes commissions for Webtoons, manga, and comic adaptations, and while reading, I kept imagining your world unfolding in panels. It has that rare combination of tone, emotion, dialogue and all that really works visually. I’d love to bring your story to life by making it into a comic or a webtoon. No pressure if you are not into the idea, but if you are, you can reach me on Discord ( Username:eve_verse_ ) or Instagram (eve_verse_) to chat or see my art. Best Regards, Eve.
Hello I'm the author Author of this story so any feedback is appreciated also this is my first story so be mindful and be constructive with all criticism
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