摘要
Imagine reincarnated in a Minecraft World. What would you do? Fight your way out of the system or stay peace within? What would you be if? Bring justice or hide cowardly? Follow Hero in his journey of a Minecraft world, uncovering secrets and escaping the system.....
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Great story, contains a motive and sub motive all the time. Writing skills need improvement but I can see it better over time, keep up the good work.
One of my favourite resurrection type of novel. It is not cringy like the others and the story line is flawless. The writing might be long and kind of not that great, but I still have a great time reading it.
My first Novel on this app.Not cringe, good plot but average writing skills. Maybe the writter is still learning at the beggining and will get better after a few chapters.
Not bad actually. Your story have unlimited potential especially set in a sandblock game like Minecraft. Character development is quite slow but smooth, suggest add in modpacks especially RL craft to make your story make more "sense". I can see your pattern of the story and plot, super excited for the next series.