/ 漫画同人 / A Man Writes A Diary While Sailing: The Wives Are Broken
摘要
Wearing the world of One Piece, writing a diary every day can make you stronger.
Taking advantage of the opportunity, he joined the hat pirates and set a small goal.
Able to punch the three generals, and hold on before kicking the four emperors.
But the female characters were all wrong, which made him unable to keep a low profile.
Nami, who took the initiative to post it, Hancock took the initiative to propose.
Gion stopped catching pirates and followed their boat all day long.
Uta just wanted to sing for me alone.
It feels like the time travel is different from the plot.
Nami: I am young and energetic, and I am your favorite little wild cat.
Gion: Just tell me who else has legs as long as mine, doesn’t my sister’s black silk look good?
Hancock: When is the right time for us to have our wedding?
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I am losing brain cells trying to read this. Names are wrong and alot of messed up writing.
Bro my eyes and mind's gonna hurt if I read your story just give me raw. What the fuck you translated.
Esta bien, pero al menos se podría dar un poco de sentido al traducirlo, ya que cuesta bastante leer sobre todo con nombres equivocados y oraciones que no tienen sentido. Hay que hacer una traducción de la traducción para que tenga sentido y entiendas la historia mas o menos bien.
It's either pretty similar or the samw translation as Dimentional wanderer starting with a Diary in One Piece in this app. I can't tell if they are the same one because the translation here is sht to say 100%.
in my favorites this here was a pokemon fanfic, how it became a translation of one piece mtl..................................................................
I wanna read the story but the insane amount of mistakes make it impossible 😭