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"Tang Yu traveled to an urban world of a light novel and became a rich second-generation villain. His only mission: to survive until the end of the plot to return to his world. He was doing fine, but unexpectedly, his internal thoughts began to be 'heard' by the female protagonists. Now they are all interested in him! Oh, he just wanted a quiet life and to survive until the end! Help!
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The translation is great, but it has the recurring error of switching the gender of the people, from his to hers, etc.
This is probably the best depiction of how a ‘somewhat’ normal guy would act and react in a shiddy cliche urban world plot type of novel. And honestly, I’m loving it! I get a dose of normality mixed with the expected brain rot. The translation is great, so thank you for your hard work🙌🏻
Hi! I just read your story, and it was so beautifully written. It’s got this kind of visual rhythm that makes every moment easy to imagine. If you’d ever be interested in seeing it as a comic or webtoon, I’d love to collaborate. Discord: (minakn0ws) Mina
Good Story although the MC is a bit weak at the beginning he is getting stronger recently so not instant OP MC but not weak as a twig like other stories. Good pace not too fast but not slow either and isn’t boring. Just some grammar errors that are easy to correct.
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I’ve read a lot of novels, but few manage to paint such clear pictures in my mind. Your storytelling is rich and immersive, and the way you capture emotion and setting makes it feel like a living world. I kept thinking how amazing it would look as a graphic novel or webtoon, the tone, pacing, and character moments all fit that format so naturally. This story really has the kind of depth and energy that could shine visually too.
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This is probably the best depiction of how a ‘somewhat’ normal guy would act and react in a shiddy cliche urban world plot type of novel. And honestly, I’m loving it! I get a dose of normality mixed with the expected brain rot. The translation is great, so thank you for your hard work🙌🏻
He has a thing for poop, hahaha. Tang Yu is a real villain, haha. [img=In your face][img=angry][img=update][img=proud][img=nervous][img=nervous]
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