/ 奇幻 / Applying Logic to the Unknown
摘要
When Caspian wanders out into the forest to meet with his friends, things take a dark turn and he ends up in a race for survival against the unknown.
Follow Caspian as he lies, steals and plans his way into a less frightening life, as long as he does not get eaten first.
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Honestly ita pretty nice. The author crafted a slightly annoying mc, he is slightly extra, dumb in some ways, but he is decently smart as well. we have already kinda seen growth in the first 27 chs. I cant say much about anything else since its too early, but i hope the author continues. But author plz use like a grammer software.
I'm really liking it so far, the quality of writing it's really good and it shows that the author has put a lot of though into it, especially with the world building. (Sorry if I expressed myself badly, I'm not a native speaker)
Author here, im giving the story 5 starts because i have big hopes for it. I am writing it as my take on mister A popping out of nowhere in a situation he does not understand and trying to get by. I am open to sugestions and criticism just try to make it coherent please. Have a good read.