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Barely Becoming a Titled Douluo, and the Counterattack System Arrives
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摘要
On going... In the world of Douluo Dalu, where strength reigns supreme, the protagonist struggles for years, barely managing to break through and become a Titled Douluo. Just as he achieves this hard-earned milestone, a mysterious Counterattack System finally awakens within him!
From then on, every step he takes defies the heavens—
Weakness? Instantly upgraded!
Enemies? Crushed with ease!
Hidden potential? Rapidly unlocked!
The protagonist embarks on an unstoppable journey of revenge, soaring from an overlooked struggler to a legendary powerhouse feared by all.
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This is actually really nice. But those who are saying System Slave, clearly hasn't read at all. This guy had innate 6 soul power. Still within 40 years he reached Title Doulou. That's almost next to impossible in Doulou 1 Timeline. But still he did it. Then came the system. It is a glitched system for sure. But it did gift him and guide him properly. Sometimes some really weird tasks were given but MC clearly denied those tasks. So NO MC is not a system slave. Last but not the least due system he reached from 91 to 95 in 1 year. Bear in mind, he had almost no potential to improve any more after reaching 91. Maybe after years of hard work he could have reached 92, but that's about it. So all the 40 YEARS OF HARD WORK IS HIS. SOLELY HIS. But from NOW ON the system will be there to make him reach 99 or above. That's the essence of this story WHICH I FREAKIN LOVE
People are so stupid, attacking the translator about things he has no control over, the translation is good, the protagonist can be considered a slave of the system, but the guy only had 6 innate souls and still managed to reach level 91 at just 40 years old, with a strange sword martial soul on top of that, if it were you you would definitely become a "slave" of a system, you do it just for money or food here in reality, why are you talking about the powerful slave?
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Your story was such a refreshing read, I couldn’t put it down. The atmosphere and dialogue painted scenes so clearly that I kept imagining them as comic panels. I’m a commission artist who visualizes stories through comic art, and yours would make such a powerful adaptation. I’d be happy to chat or share ideas if you’re ever curious. You can always find me on Discord (bennett_lol) or Instagram (@eve_verse_).
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Two words: System Slave. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................