/ 武侠 / Classroom Of The Elite: Strings of The Puppeteer Master
摘要
The C.I.A gains intel that there is a project White Room, and one of their successors is attending ANHS.
Lloyd is sent to reveal and gauge the White room master piece to uncover the dark truth of the White Room experiment.
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You should rewrite the first few chapters this novel has good potential and could be something truly great once you get rid of small spelling errors and the like
this is the most honest review you'll get, so this is the second review and am still not sure if this novel is good, there is not that much character development but am trying to keep pace with the numerous characters so please bear with me, the mind game might be also be confusing but I assure you that I'll answer all questions.
This is actually my first fanfic so bear with me. I hope i get better at writing