/ 奇幻 / Cosmos System: Transmigration to the other world
摘要
[Looking for a romantic and heart warming story, or are you looking for an Mc who breaks his limits, Then check this story out. Journey with Feng Zhen as he becomes the COSMOS Supreme Ruler in another world]
Being a Librarian in the modern world, The life of Feng Zhen were full with ups and downs, that was until he died.
After reincarnating in another world with a System, Feng Zhen swore not to be trampled upon in his new life.
Journey with Feng Zhen as he grows to reach the peak of martial art, watching over worlds, galaxies along with his system and becoming the Supreme Ruler of the COSMOS.
[ Note that this novel is rated (18)]
[Never judge a book by its cover]
[Don't judge the book by its cover, try reading it to chapter 15, before you make your conclusion that the story is bad]
Note: I have received complain about the mc being too lustful. Note that the mc is still young and impulsive.
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The story is amazing so far and I can't wait to read more.I love how the main character is slowly having more of his past revealed and how funny his personality is.
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The story could of been way better author adds a lot of communication with the system for no reason for each little thing mc ask the system for help or for clarification. When it comes to women story is fast paced for strength itself it’s kinda slow paced because each time he gets stronger author adds a setback which forces plot for no reason I get if you do it once but author did it twice in 100 chapters. Mc is really dumb and repeats a lot of things meaning he makes the same mistakes over and over. Author makes the story unorganized and stops the flow of the story when mid fight he starts talking to system to ask dumb questions. Last thing Mc hesitates a lot while fighting leading for the person he is fighting to find ways out or put mc in hard situations. Sorry this is more of a rant than a review I read the whole things trying to give the story a chance because the grammar is pretty good🙃
honestly book is very good but u skipping a lot of stuff and not moving in a stable way..i like the getting strong quick but it also feels like he's not getting stronger either..and after u know it something else happens
The mc has a system to aid him in his cultivation. He also has some techniques that help him greatly I especially like the technique that produces an internal world.Keep going Author.
I am not good at rating but i like this story allot so here i am saying. what a great story... ............................................................................
On chapter 12 so far and if this is any indication of how the book will be after 100 I will drop, super fast-paced even compared to sign-in novels, mc breezes through stages in seconds. somehow mc showed up, saved a girl, has no conversation with her and after 2 chapters they consider each other husband and wife. That is the blandest romance I have ever read, I'm positive a 5th grader could write it better than that. My advice to the author, slow down and try a rewrite by adding more details and some more effort maybe instead of doing timeskips where he kills beasts for a week and goes up a major stage try showing 1 or 2 fights, that would be another 1-2 chapters and actually make the readers feel like the mc is working for his power
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