摘要
At the end of a Dynasty filled with Demons and rampant Martial Artists, Lin Xuankong has unfortunately transmigrated to this era, becoming a poor and sickly old man. However, with the help of the system Life Plate, his Talent and Comprehension grow stronger the longer he lives.
And his much younger wife is a martial master...
"That iron ball used to be Zhang Wu's knife. I squeezed it a couple of times, and it ended up like this! " said his wife.
"I hope you can teach me some Cultivation Techniques. As for the reward..." said Lin eagerly.
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overall I am liking this story but man the price for privilege chapters is way to high 50 dollors to get access to 25 chapters is to much
Put a harem tah on this bruh. I started reading it and chapter 81 something it became harem. I dropped it after that. I didn't know it was harem. But over all I was actually enjoying it. . didn't want to drop it. but it is what it is.. If u like harem. it's good.
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One of the stories that I didn't expect to get hooked onto... My rating would be higher if I didn't find mistakes in the translation. I also disliked how high the MC's luck was, whatever he needed the most would just appear before him in some way or other... While I don't inherently dislike this kind of plot armor luck, the way it was executed was just blatant. At some point of the story I could just guess "Oh, some opponent is gonna get killed by him and he will have just what he needed on him" whenever he needed something. Translation quality = decent Character design = Good Story development = Great World background = Almost Peak The thing I liked most about this was the world-building and the way the story unfolded (example, I was curious how/when he was gonna reveal his powers to his sect mates, which kept me anticipating).
I was enjoying it until the MC leaves his initial nation to join a sect. Before that, the pacing was just right: he developed fast but believably, and the conflicts were interesting. There was a strong Gary Stu element, but the plot was strong enough to make that acceptable. After that point, the writing style switched for the worse. There have been at least 80 chapters of obvious dragging out of the plot: entire chapters where the peanut gallery speculates or is in awe, multiple chapters dedicated to tedious descriptions of a single passerby’s breakthrough, arena fights where each chapter consists of a fighter thinking about then beginning to make a move, etc. Because of this switch, I do not recommend anyone read the novel.
Initially there was a lot of promise and the premise was a unique twist on the usual cultivation story. Things were great and I really enjoyed the pacing. Then around the 500 chapter mark the author basically gave up on any reasonable pacing and decided to pad out the word count to an INSANE degree! Between ch.500 - 600 is basically just ONE battle arc! Some chapters are literally just recaps and reminders where nothing happens! It's absurdly maddening! I'm temporarily dropping this at ch.600 and will come back when there's 1000 chapters cuz at this pacing that's only 4 arcs. Author went full-ret*rd just when things were really picking up. Maybe some future reader can tell me when MC actually becomes an immortal because at this rate it might be ch.900. 🤬
Bro just want to say add a Harem Tag will you, people who doesn't like harem will at least be spared from reading it
The story had me hooked the whole way through, and the characters really stuck with me. Each chapter kept things interesting and made me want to keep reading. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Keep it coming!
Like others have said the story started off gret. Then the pacing tanked and the author decided to put as much filler as he can in. It literally feels like the story is being sabotaged by someone. It’s devastating to see the story being ruined like this.
Hm, hmm. It's good ,the character dialogues are unique and not cringe one I have read across all the manhua and novel ☺️. Development ,pace and details are soo good that in every chapter I wished and wishing "this novel absolutely should get a manhua " from the bottom of my heart . It excited with it's everything from the very first chapter and the most are characters not being cringe and usual dialogues and the detail world building and the interaction among them including characters around Mc and even lii xiolan was written well in detail which a lot like likeable about this novel are the dialogues and characters interaction
Not good, too many cliches. Any time the mc needs something it falls into his lap within a couple of chapters if not the same one. He doesn’t need to even look for it sometimes. Also the fights fall into the cliches of the mc doing twelve things at once while his enemies stand around doing nothing and therefore winning without getting a scratch. Not every fight needs to be a life or death struggle but when it’s too easy it just come off as lazy writing to me.
why does these guys write old man trope these MCs will die in middle of sex by exhaustion
I am so in love with this book, vvvvvvvvvvvvv amazing, 10000000% recommend, love it ,
Story a stretch, so a martial arts family has a rich young miss, and by her side is a power maid. The son of the family lusts after the maid, so to remove the temptation in her own home, the matriarch picks a poor elderly rice cake seller randomly on the street to marry the maid, the old man deinka so much wine on wedding night he dies and mc takes over the body with the a goldwn finger advances cultivation soeed and bi bottlenecks, ao he trains in the longivity technique which extends life years.