摘要
Marcus Reid was an ordinary student at the University of Gotham, just trying to survive exams, deadlines, and the city’s chaos. But everything changed the day he got mugged by the robbers and died at gunpoint.
Yet death wasn’t the end.
When Marcus woke up in the morgue, something inside him had changed.
Warning - AU
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the most stupid DC fanfiction i have ever come across... a chinese one is 10X better than this shit. you come back from the dead, and the next thing the whole of Gotham knows you are a metahuman. TF??! his power itself is a very cool and OP one, without it being over the top. but your story development is 😑
good concept poor execution, plot is often repetitive (possibly AI-assisted judging by the grammar and writing style), overall a decent story if you can tolerate a bit of boredom in the repetitive parts
As I’ve been progressively reading this the premise is interesting and the idea holds especially with how the character is gaining his abilities, the problem is the MC feels like Batman/Bruce Wayne just missing the money and having an actual support system.
Hi, I really enjoyed reading your story; the scenes were so clear that they instantly formed in my mind. Writing that feels this naturally visual is rare. I create Webtoon/Comic commissions, Manga, and Character/Cover Art. Whether you want a specific scene illustrated or a comic version explored, I’d be glad to discuss possibilities. Discord: (minakn0ws) | IG: (eve_verse_) Mina
the story has changed. originally he died because of a joker attack on Gotham university. Now he died to three thugs on sone random ally. what gives? The power stays the same and the characters but the plot has changed.
Where is the old version when he is taken in by Bruce Wayne and gets transfered to a secure facility? I need to know asap pleaeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
A run-of-the-mill story with artificial intelligence, an F for the effort nonetheless, and because I can't give it less than an F. I won't go beyond chapter 2. Bruce Wayne takes someone he doesn't know to his base, reveals their identity, and is left alone with Alfred, who is the first person he's ever seen. This level of trust is unusual for someone who never fully trusts anyone.