摘要
this story will be deleted soon and be uploaded in different account and till the story of the acc catches up with this position of the published story, this story will remain. i will dlt account after that. for reading the story search " The Dropped God "
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- 寫作品質
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寫檢討
Its my second time reading it bcs i came from wattpad however now i can see some changes in chapter's its a huge change specially 1&2 changed a lot. Maybe you've improved it.
참고로 저는 파리하를 굉장히 좋아하는데 주인공이 악녀처럼 생겨서 감정이 통하는 것 같아요. 그는 노력이 덜 정당하다는 이유로 분노하지 않습니다. 전반적인 스토리 개선으로 인해 스토리가 다른 것 같은 느낌이 듭니다.-하지만 나는 그렇게 쉽게 판단할 사람이 아니다. 저는 웹소설을 처음 접하는 독자입니다. 무슨 말을 해야 할지 모르겠습니다. 행운을 빕니다.
Bud good showcase but the story is wired to be honest stii hope best in future and fix irrors of story hope it will get better as you mentioned
There are some potential i can see from this. Looks like a superhero world possibility and it seems revenge stufs but i feel its not the main plot lets see what happened
他のアニメとは違う雰囲気です。マーとかそういうものではなく、スーパーヒーローの物語のように感じますが、そのアイデアは気に入りました。マーベルDCのようなものかもしれません。ある意味無敵な気がする - good luck with your story i will be reading it