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Out of nowhere our protagonist Arthur was smack by truck-kun and transported to another world.
This is my first time writing a novel
English is not my primary language
I’m very limited in my word so go easy on me
Anything you recognize is not mine..
Except for my O.C and the world that i build
I'll also don't own the image
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Bro the stories interesting but its all ****ed up...grammar and even worse the structure..have some respect for the readers and fix it... suggestion: dont make the MC a beta/*****...make him a one man army...dont neuter him....add some romance and fluff..if harem dont make it ridiculous by adding hundreds of women...instead make it small like 3.....max 5
I just hope Author don't drop this .coz this is pretty enjoyable and relaxing to read. Mc personality is likable for me ..😆😁 Mc is strong but not annoying 😊
There is not much story or character growth, this novel is made for indulging the author's fantasy in written form. It is one that you would read just to pass time and out of chapters to read from other works as far as concerned. Though, these people who keep making 5 star bumps without proper reviews are annoying as hell that it misguides people of how good these types of fictions are...
Yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yupyup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup yup
MC retarded and eighth grader syndrome. He behaves like an absolute fool who does not know anything, although he claims to have read a bunch of novels and short stories about such things. With such knowledge, he should know that he is not the strongest and can be killed, but no, he is stupid. Absurd. The story is good, but the main character spoils it, because it is down and absurd.
Read a little bit of this fic and I already saw huge problems. The system talks way too much, MC is a bit of an idiot, comedy is forced, skills can be instantly mastered and values change every other chapter. It's a crack fic and there are better ones you could read.
You know.... can you fast forward it a little bit then travel to other anime world fast like nasuverse then get arturia and kill the matou and save sakura.... its a little bit slow?? and short... make it more evolving. I admit its very unpredictable but its slow😅
I love the story until the dxd arc. I've read too many dxd fanfic already that it gets boring to me reading another dxd ff. So when will he travel again?? Don't waste too much time on dxd world and the mc is a bit like an FC when he got there. He takes Azazel just for him getting workers on his cafe or restaurant maybe. I forgot.. Is Azazel that weak?
Mc dumb as fuxk system too op for its own good Cmon out of everything he wants devil fruit at least be sensible and ask for something that makes sure he survives injuries and wounds and what's with this beta attitude Cmon man u got a system op as fuxk and yet u are thinking of being moderate and considerate of other people if u wanna write a self insert than be totally shameless and then write what u want. It is just like any other Japanese isekai with beta mc. I don't like it
the last chapters are interesting but they are too short, because you go too quickly from a sex scene to a scene where vali want to fight with him. Would be interesting if he participates in the combat of the peace conference. Please thank you
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Mantap bro lanjut kan bro mohon 1 chapter sehari ya kalau bisa jangan d jatuhkan krn banyak novel yg bagus akhir e d jatuhkan d tunggu lanjutannya bro mantap cerita e latar bekang e bagus
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The idea of it is quite nice but everything else is like "meh". This story seems more of a wish-fulfillment one rather than a normal fanfic. The growth of the MC seems so slow, the level of intelligence of the MC seems a bit low, although the powers might be good, the execution was a bit bad. Even the fact that he claims he read many novels but in different worlds, he was portrayed to be ignorant of some events. The worst thing that threw me off of this novel was the grammar. Dude, you could've installed Grammarly while writing this thing. Even the romance sucks, it's like he meets someone and then they just want him. I dont know why authors have this obsession of making their MC way too handsome for the audience. I see no point in it if it has no substance.
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I just can't read this............................ It gets worst the more i read............ I quit reading midway ch 3 ...........'.............
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