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My life has always been boring and monotonous, but now I feel more and more excited about what will happen from now on.
I declare here that the story of Cobra Kai is not mine, nor is it the story of The Vampire Diaries and I declare here that the story The originals is not mine ...
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The novel is very bad, to begin with, the author puts the first person between ", and the dialogues between '. Furthermore, the protagonist is pathetic, he had an erection just from having contact with a woman, not even a normal virgin would do that to him, and the worst thing is that he blames it on his adolescent body, it is pathetic. And finally, the protagonist acts like a teenager when he is supposed to be mentally an adult. And how unbearable Tori can be, she previously said that she wanted to get closer to the protagonist but her attitude shows the opposite, and no one in their right mind would continue dating her because of how she made fun of the protagonist.
It's decent, about as good as an ai translated novel, the fact that there's no telling of who's talking annoys me though since I'm lost half the time on whos saying what
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The novel is actual good, but Dear God MC's love life is a freaking rollercoaster. Tory, Caroline, Sam, Hayley, then Tory again, then Sam again like WTF. On and off and on and off. Jesus Christ. Also starting from chapter 49 the writing becomes weird.
Really enjoying this fic, cobra kai is one of the most underrated fic ideas happy to see there is still some ongoing.
Many may not like this story, many may think MC is a scumbag, he is. But the story itself is somehow compelling enough for me to enjoy this to the end. This will be my all-time favourite.
I don't know if the author is very indecisive but the MC's love life is a mess, he can't decide who to be with and it's very frustrating, also the characters fall in love very quickly, less than a month they already have another,couple not even they know what they feel.
Pls what's with the extra emotions, Example"Like a fire I want to rekindle,like a Melody I Want to play and so on Its becoming to repetitive
better than chinese fanfic but there are no cotation in conversation between characters and the story is a little childish