摘要
Han Yi accidentally crossed into the Cultivation World and became an outer disciple of the Xuan Dan Sect.
Sects, Immortal Countries, Sacred Places, Heavenly Demons—the dangers in the Cultivation World were everywhere.
Fortunately, Han Yi had a Skill Panel.
Alchemy, Formations, Talismans, Divine Abilities, Magic Skills...
Just work hard, and everything will be alright.
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寫檢討The translation is just terrible .I don't understand why webnovel even bothers to translate a novel if they just post MTL version of the novel.
Cliche master, master of all cliches. All the cliches that I don't like Mc transmigrates☑️ finds out he'll be kicked out of the sect if he doesn't ...☑️ Struggles but fails ☑️ gets a panel\ golden finger ☑️ ergo the training montage ☑️ gets super strong and skilled and comes back better than before☑️ also, he just has characteristics that I don't Super naive super kind super polite and amiable I mean you're in a ruthless cultivation world. Sooner or later it will backfire. He's just so easily targeted all the time. And his "friends" Target him too.
I ve read all chapters so far. And now I want to do a good review.Shortly, this mc has fire root and developing & earning money from alchemy job. But somehow using the money (spirit stones) for cultivation is purer way than using pills and elixirs. Using elixirs gave people less progress than 1 spirit coin. And the elixirs prices go from 5 to 50 spirit coins. Hmm and this guy is probably best alchemist under Elders who got foundation established level cultivation. and he doesnt even use his pills for cultivating. So annoying how author didnt even give an idea about using own pills. Mc lvl ups every 3 to 6 years and there are no friends. close door cultivation. somehow he requires some spirit coins to level up faster, so he goes out for selling pills and getting money. Whatever I wrote here is all the story how goes. If you want to read / follow the process up to you. Byeee
the translation constantly messes up the realms and the character is way too stupid to tolerate..
The translation quality ruins the entire novel because the names and ranks are constantly changing to the point I'm not sure what is what
This book is very much what it says on the synopsis, its a book where he only has a proficency panel to see his progress/complete incomplete skills, very very basic system in essense, its a good story but the MC is very much both naive and a coward early on and while the world is dangerous we have yet to see if its just paranoia or if theybreally are out to get him. Overall well worth the read if you like alchemy/money hungry/cautious protagonists.
Having finished the novel and the author concluded the story at chapter 980, I have to say I like this novel and I am biased. There are most definitely better stories out there but having followed this story and enjoyed it enough to translate the original chapters myself, it is enjoyable read. The author himself admitted the quality of the story was not good and at times he was just pumping out chapters even when he found them terrible. This explains the "rush" and constant fighting and on the run the MC was experiencing. The author persevered even when sick to write chapters later on and the conclusion is an open ending at the end. Han Yi finally achieved the power to leave the Sourceless Space and go beyond the wall, into the Lunji Space, learning the origin of the "system"/Tianhe pillar he had all this time. Sadly we won't be seeing his journey to higher realms as there is about 4+ higher realms that we know of that can be achieved in this new world beyond the wall. The author said he will write another book in a few days which will follow a different MC that will eventually meet Han Yi outside the wall, who has become the Tianhe palace master if we ever get there. This is on the contingency that the book does as well as this one. For those that just wants to follow a story through to the end, this one wasn't a bad journey in itself.
揭示劇透The book is really good. the story is engaging, fun, and brilliant. Thank you, author, for putting it out there . more chapters, please
total garbage translation..........................................................................................................................................................
I changed my mind I had given it 3 stars before but this is hot garbage as i read more raws. Author keeps making new enemies out of thin air, snatches away MC s things to make it look fair including opportunities and sorts and lots of consistency issues. If anyone has read gate of good fortune they will know what i am talking about