摘要
~Mature Content~
A guy living his boring life as he play games on his pc. He loves to play erotics and adult games, and one day because of some random draw or something he was chosen as ‘Beta Player/Tester’ for the game.
without any hesitation in his mind he sign the form he got in his email and in few days he got the VR Capsule for the beta testing.
Of couse he didn’t have to pay for anything, and will get the chance to play an adult game first time in a VR.
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[All the characters in the novel that will appear will all be of the age of 18 or above]
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5評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Fun concept, free 5 start for you Sir. I have w questions tho. Is there any kind of yuri here? I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. Is there any hope for some winc est 😎? Thanks!
well the beginning is best, the story is well written .some mistakes here and there and sometimes it feels like the real world but it's not. well the content is best. Very cultured content ☯️. adult scenes are well written . also MC has NTR protection so hope no NTR. well good work author.
It gives what it promises, the only things I would change would be given the characters a little more dept, some backstory or flaws, and show some images of them so we can get a better idea of how they look given that they descriptions are good but not complex, just my opinion though
just found you novel and read the first 5 chapters bcz it is all it has now. well I really like the Sypnosis and tbh I really like the story till now, though there are many grammar mistakes like there are not commas and sometimes there are small 'i' which should be big 'I' hope you correct them.😌😌😌😌😌