/ 奇幻 / I Got a Cheat Ability in a Different World
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Tenjou Yuuya has been a bullied boy since the past.
He lives in the home of his beloved grandfather while he goes to school. As usual, he receives a harsh bullying, and he takes an extended absence from school to have some time to heal his wounds.
While on this long time of absence, he takes the opportunity to clean his grandfather’s house and goes to a room he never went before, where his grandfather keep many different objects that he gathered from his travels around the world. While he was arranging the objects, he found a door not on a wall among the objects.
Out of curiosity he opens this door, what he found on the other side was…
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Just finished your story and I have to say, it’s genuinely one of the most visual pieces I’ve read in a while. Every scene felt alive, like it was meant to be illustrated. I specialize in commission-based comic art and would love to bring something like this to life someday if you’re ever open to it. Your storytelling already paints the perfect framework for a visual adaptation. Feel free to check out my work on Instagram (@eve_verse_) or Discord (bennett_lol) anytime.
Love it, great idea. Takes the classic isekai trope and gives it a fresh/unique spin with 1 question that every reader has thought of at least once: “What if I could go back and forth between the 2 worlds?” Keep the chapters coming. This story needs/deserves a proper story arcs and an ending/epilogue.
It was for isekai lovers and you are going to feel the amazing stats of mc and his development