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Jake awakens in The Walking Dead hospital with three powers:
Shepherd of the Dead (Necromancy): You can issue simple, one-word mental commands ("stop," "follow," "attack") to a small group of walkers. This power will grow stronger with time and practice, allowing for more complex commands over larger numbers.
The Survivor's Bounty: Once per day, you can summon a day's worth of food and water. This amount starts at rations for one person and permanently increases by one ration for every new, trusted member who joins your group.
Equivalent Exchange (from full metal Alchemist): You can deconstruct and reconstruct any non-living matter you touch (repairing weapons, purifying water, fixing engines). * Healing Clarification: You can also perform alchemical healing. Instead of a life-force cost, you must draw the equivalent mass (minerals, water, etc.) from the surrounding environment (the earth, a nearby carcass) to fuel the healing. As a bonus, your power is 50% more efficient, meaning you only need to draw half the material cost that would normally be required.
Cursed with foreknowledge he cannot speak, his warnings emerge as gibberish, dooming early attempts to save others.
He joins Rick's quarry group, hiding abilities while secretly practicing; food manifests daily, scaling with trust.
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honestly I see the mc killing himself or leaving the group. This weight of knowing and no power to do anything and having to watch people die. We're just reading this guy fall further and further into self loathing. I don't recommend reading this it's just depressing.
Multiple things are wrong ( I don't like) with this book. SPOILERS. So first is his so-called gag order from god. Like not telling things specific like when Walkers are arriving in the future (like days or weeks out unless you saw them marching tword you)then sure, but putting a gag one him that sound draw them is just stupid and then he isn't gagged another time vice earlier when he warned that walkers were coming so the book isn't consistent and when he is gagged about warning others that walkers are coming HE PUTS HIMSELF ON WATCH WHICH IS MENT TO WARN OTHER PEOPLE THAT THE WALKERS ARE COMING BUT HE MENTIONS MULTIPLETIMESTHAT HE CANT DO THAT!. Another thing is that it says he knows that a family is in the pharmacy but it never says how he knows (like seeing or hearing). And the last thing I'll mention is his constant b!ttching that he can't warn anyone, but he doesn't arm himself to try TO CHANGE THINGS! Overall, it could become a good book if the MC actually thought a little.
The Mc had days to prepare for the attack and he could have set up traps and alarms but nope he's crying about the living. When it's time he went and fought with his fist.
the worst fanfic I ever read in my life,what's the point of having power and not being able to utilise them,also mc is so funny limited by that stupid restriction ,mc is a whining btch with a hero complex he this everyone life is his response, what the he'll is this story man so much wasted potential, I regret wasting my time reading this garbage
gave him great power but many excuses not to use them, unlike other writers who like their main character to be cold and distant to other humans, even if their death can be avoided, you made a rare good main character, but unable to change anything.
what a letdown mc keep whining about everything also he is just a nuisance since the story still follow the original also whenever something bad happen mc always blams himself
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A ver tuvo tiempo de preparar todo para salvar aún que sea poner pinchos o una maldita cuerda y latas alrededor del campamento un poco alejado para avisar a los superviviente solo se quedó y se puso a llorar 😭 segundo si no te entiende lo que dices y no puedes enseñar lo que dices directamente muestrales acaso es posible también ? Digo el ruido es algo que hasta los cazadores saben que deben minimizar y Rick y Shane siendo policías sabrían que no tiene. Que hacer ruido
The story seems promising, but the main character acts like a madman. He can't talk about certain topics and spouts nonsense. There's a lack of a well organized system and inventory, the mc arrives at camp with an empty backpack, but it automatically fills up the next day, which is very suspicious and everyone notices. Also, the main character can use his powers in front of other people, so the other restrictions don't make sense. Otherwise, I think the author could polish the story better in the future.
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Mc kills the fic. He just feels brain dead with a hero complex. I know your trying to build character for him but it's just off putting and cringe to read.
Bra what made you start curse with knowledge ff huh? Man you are starting na new branch of FF but man that's gonna be an headache if ff author's follow your lead😢
This is a rather fresh take on The walking dead. So far I like the story, I'm looking forward to what our mc does ahn how would he circumvent his restrictions
I was very impressed after reading your story—it's excellent and has great potential for a comic book adaptation. As a professional comic artist, I specialize in transforming narratives into engaging visual experiences through character art and full comic pages. An adaptation could dramatically increase your story's visibility. I would love to explore this with you. My portfolio is available for your review on: Discord: harper_clark Instagram: IG_harperr_ Thank you for your time and consideration.
I did a great review of 5 stars before but now I'm starting to feel hesitant of where the story is going as it feels like some plots points are wrong like the CDC Mc refers to its security measures under Jenners design which I doubt, also Mc could of just destroyed the one layer of bullet proof glass, but no went through the security shutters and I assumed armored doors, I know Rick might have not picked up a grenade this time but still, bullet proof glass would of been easier than all those doors, I'm starting to think Mc isn't really bright, also Mc basically revealed 2/3 of his abilities not fully by choice might as well reveal the last one at this rate and a love interest so early on makes me see a bad future for this story. . . But do please at least give the story a try, I might not like its development abit but someone else could???
Pure shit. The MC keeps saying he “can’t save people from the show,” yet he still runs around saving random nobodies. Why follow the cast like a loyal sidekick instead of thinking for yourself? With wishes and powers, he still acts like a background extra. And the constant crying over people dying? This is an apocalypse people die, you can’t save everybody. The MC is unrealistic, weak-minded, and absolutely not built for this world.
I haven't read it yet, but please don't drop. the synopsis sounds amazing.👍👍👍👍👍
mental dan cara berpikir mc seperti anak² tdk sprti org dewasa, tingkahnya menyalahkan diri sendiri karna tidak bisa menyelamatkan seseorang terlalu berlebihan, punya banyak keunggulan tapi tidak bisa memanfaatkannya dengan efisien, tau informasi yg jelas ttg apa yg akan terjadi tapi tdk bisa memanfaatkannya dengan benar, malah ngotot berusaha ngasih tau team pdhal sdh tau tdk bsa, klo tdk bsa ya hrs nya cepat² mikir jalan lain untuk mencegah hal tsb tdk terjadi atau meminimalisir kejadian tsb kan dia punya waktu bukannya tdk punya waktu untuk mempersiapkan apa yg akan terjadi! singkat padat dan jelasnya MC TOLOL
Will change this review if it actually improves Good: it's the walking dead Bad: - Hero complex, self loathing, probably has issue with his brain -Forced relationship - Forced plot, can’t reveal what he knows, yet proceeds to be able when it’s convenient -Helps others when he can’t even help himself -Knowingly puts himself in unnecessary danger
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the mc killed this novle for me ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................