摘要
Benjaman Francis was a man at the doors of death.
His life had been consumed by the inevitability of death, but just when he decided to give up.
He was granted power greater than he could ever imagine.
He is the maker and the creator and all his subjects must obey whether they like it or not.
Life is but a theater after all .
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This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed with more readers!
Wow! The author has some really strong writing and descriptive skills! The novel felt somehow poetic, yet still cutting with the bitter harshness of reality- an artful thing to master! I'm only a couple of chapters in, but I really like where the plot is going, not to mention how much I love to main character! Keep up the great work, definitely would recommend!
Wow. This is some of the most insanely in-depth world building I have come across. The protagonist is given the ability to construct a whole new world from scratch, and construct he does in incredibly vivid detail. The writing quality is extremely high in this one. The author is very talented, with a high IQ and large vocabulary, making this work seem quite a bit more substantial than your average web novel. In terms of characters, the opening two chapters - before the protagonist starts constructing his new world - really do a great job at conveying the protagonist as a very 3 dimensional and sympathetic character, resigned to his impending fate. It's really engrossing reading and I can't recommend this enough. Even though the content wasn't my cup of tea, the writing quality and the sheer ambitious nature of the author's story and world creation overall make this a must read experience. Give it a go now!
This is a great read! With very deft writing and a deep dive into the character, the author takes us on an incredible journey of adventure and wonder, with surprises around every corner. Truly a supurb effort.
Pretty good. I like teh charaters and the i'm just a sucker for god fics so that's a plus from me. Update is okay but it's not everyday.I think it's 5 times a week. Pretty good book.
Writing quality is great along with the best choice of words. Stability of updates, I see no problem here. Story development flows smoothly. In character design, you could emphasize the emotions of the male lead really well. World background is written well. Overall this already a great read and addition to my collection. Keep it up, author!
Would have been decent if it weren't for the following: The retconning of character personalities and thus invalidating previous character development. Plot ?? It is not there with mc abandoning his goals and ideas, all to create pointless drama... in a pointless bid to attract new readers. World building is outright abandoned what happened to the creation myth of the universe... what with all the chapters dedicated to it... unfortunately the author writes as if it was never supposed to be relevant... so then where is the world building ??? Pacing is very poor with dozens of chapters of dedicated to the world building only to be abandoned, while important details take barely a chapter to introduce without any build up. You can rate the novel highly for being better than majority of the garbage on this site but if you look closely you'll see it is barely decent. Overall mediocre, deceptive(retconning), pretentious (goes from subtle story telling to attention-seeking drama), convoluted(the main theme changes more than 3 times) and aimless(story conclusion is rushed). You can definitely find better novels on this site... no need to be desperate enough to settle for this travesty.
A very unique and interesting concept to the story. The mc is granted power to defy the problems and suffering life had to offer to him, and the world now becomes his oyster. Writing quality is also articulate. Keep up the good work, author.
This is easily one of the best books I've read on this app. The author displays his incredible talent with his amazing writing style, very detailed world construct, and interesting plot. The amount of detail the author put into this is incredible. The descriptions are very detailed and at the same time, easy to follow. I highly recommend this.
I love this book because it has alot of orginality to The story and charaktors.
The story is rather interesting in my opinion. It's neither too fast paced nor too slow paced. Infact, i think it moves at a good speed given the kind of story that it is. I just wished the author would add a bit more description in his summary so others could see the novel. I almost skipped over this books because of that.