/ 玄幻 / Invincible with Flawed Simulator
摘要
[Simulation + Longevity + Talent Enhancement + No Overpowering Combat Power + Fast Pace + Neutral Protagonist, Free to Play]
In a pure martial arts world, Yunshou thought his weak cheats would lead him to an ordinary life...
Until, at fourteen, he acquired a second, flawed simulator. Little did he know, the combination of the two cheats would make him invincible!
After a fleeting time (not much, actually), Yunshou suddenly looked back and realized he had become a Martial Emperor, dominating time and space, transcending the past and present, and traversing the ages!
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2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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Your writing style is so expressive, I could almost see every moment happening. Do you ever imagine your story in comic form? I’m new around here and really curious to hear your thoughts about it!
Writing quality: Good — I didn’t notice any significant problems. Update stability: The last update was five days ago, so it’s not ideal, but considering the frequency of the other chapters, it’s acceptable for now. Story development: So-so — I don’t like that the simulation’s “avatar” keeps getting into dangerous situations unnecessarily. Character design: I don’t like it much, especially the protagonist’s avatar, who at first only thought about performing “lewd acts.” That hasn’t changed much, but at least now he pays attention to martial arts. Global background: Well, currently the protagonist is exploring a different region in each simulation.
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