摘要
Ye Liang traveled through the parallel world, and also obtained the Immortal Cultivation Voice Package System. As long as he turned on the cultivating voice package, he could enter the state of cultivating immortals.
However, when he met the school flower, the school flower actually heard his Immortal voice.
[You can’t afford me in the previous life, but in this life, my Seven Profound Immortal Venerable makes you unable to climb high——! ]
School flower:?
[The sky does not give birth to me, Li Qixuan, the kendo is like a long night-the sword comes! ]
School flower:?!
[Three million sword immortals in the sky, you must lower your eyebrows when you see me. 】
School flower: So you are a rebirth immortal emperor?!
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The premise of the story is enjoyable but the mc is one of the densest there is. Plus the system is super annoying, it just makes everything a constant snowball of misunderstanding for those who can hear it and for the mc himself.