摘要
What happen when you give someone a universal soul? Good question. Anyway, I'll sum up the beginning of the book like other authors.
Jake was a normal man. Be worked in an office, like a normal person. He also happened to be a complete nerd. But during his best friends birthday party, he gets beamed by a pillar of light? How odd...
A bit later, he wakes up laying on a tree, some stuff to his side. He looks through the stuff, and finds a small bottle. It says to drink it.
Our main character isn't an idiot though-
Or so one might think.
Anyways, if you want to know more, maybe read the book?
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3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
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There was no story development besides writing what happens after a certain action as you think. The character design was decent not any criticism worth saying on that. But the world background. You didn’t even try, you should try to describe the world. You didn’t do that any. I would have been ok with it if you had described the world to a certain degree at least what the surrounding areas are or what they look like. I’m done with this review. And after all I’ve said you should keep writing. To improve and get better.
Books like this are the reson I'm on Webnovel. I really enjoy your story and I can't wait to read more of it. .