/ 奇幻 / Kingdom building system : my system has a bug
摘要
I was a prodigy in My past Life. I have written Many thesis and Research Papers on Engineering, Physics and Chemistry for which I have won gold Medals. One day While I was playing Pubg I fell asleep and was transmigrated to a new world. And guess what just like Other MC I have my mana heart which is the source of Mana Crippled by my Father who is a King and was exiled into a remote place.
Yeah I received a system but It is non-functional and was only able to see the other talents and that's it.
As I gave up and thinking about Alchemy , I received as a System which functions quite well.
What!! My mana heart is Recovered.
And Top of that I can extract Mana from dying creatures.
I gain levels as I kill!!!
Simply Wowww!!!!!!
As I checked the inventory I was like
WTF!!!!
Grenades , Land mines and Missiles that too in millions in number and the number grows .
I can Copy one talent as long as I kill the Creature and What's more If I copy one or more same talent they can fuse.
This system is surely overpowered and pretty sure It has a bug.
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writing for the first half of chapters is not that up to the mark needs improvement but storyline is 🤩
I really enjoyed the start of this story and the direction it's going. The character feels serious but there is some humor and silliness as well with the character impersonation. The skills are interesting and have lots of potential for development. The system progress and pace of the story seem to be coming along nicely. I appreciate that the author is keeping a moderately fast pace to the development as it's become tradition for authors to drag on and milk the story repeatedly. I'm just hoping their will be further progress instead of a nerf or reset in the future. If he gets too big for the world then he should leave the world and have the story play out on a grander universal scale. I also like the thought about who gave the system and the god(s) watching him. It's something that isn't considered in some stories and could lead to some interesting developments and routes for him to take as he gets super powerful with his bugged system. Keep it up!
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The story has the potential to become great and looking forward for his kingdom and revenge. So exciting 😁😁