/ 游戏 / Legendary Player In A Game-Like World
摘要
Ethan, a passionate gamer, is presented with a remarkable opportunity to participate as a beta tester for the highly anticipated virtual reality game, Eternia Unleashed. Eager to embark on a thrilling virtual escapade, he eagerly accepts, unaware of the mind-boggling journey that awaits him. Little does Ethan know that this seemingly ordinary gaming experience will transport him and his fellow testers into another world, defying the boundaries between fiction and reality.
As Ethan immerses himself deeper into the captivating realm of Aetheria, he discovers that this realm holds secrets far beyond what he had ever imagined. Together with his companions, fellow beta testers who have also become unwitting adventurers, they find themselves entangled in a dangerous and mesmerizing dimension that surpasses their wildest dreams.
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#romance #action #adventure #r18 #system #magic #weaktostrong #videogame #levelup #mmorpg
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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
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- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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In the beginning, the story doesn't stop with action and character development. You get a sense of teamwork and survival. When a larger group is joined there are hints of how the MC and group will work together. but the focus switches to battle and the mc grows stronger. The new characters don't seem as fleshed out and are not described as much. The battles become the main focus and are so detailed they seem be repeating. eght months ago as of this writing 6/28/24 the updates ended. it's really too bad because I was looking forward to seeing how his Archer friend would compete with the healer girl or accept her as a sister for the MC's affection. Even the hints that the red haired guild leader would try to gain his attention. the set up is there for a nice long enjoyable story. but it is currently in hiatus
First of all the review will be a bit low due to the story being new and fresh.The writing quality is good tho it can still improve which is a good sign, and the story development can still be adjusted as it's moderate in my opinion but this is normal and you don't need to change that really much, go at your own pace. I'll be rating the character design as 1 start cause there's practically nothing(correct me if im wrong) but the stability is the good thing about this i think? 2 stars for the world background because you haven't expanded on it yet. Overall the storys's potential is 8/10 for me can the low aspects can be improved further as the story continue to develop.