/ 科幻 / Modern Weapon System in the Zombie Apocalypse
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Riku Hayashi was a high school student who was addicted to playing mobile games. During his free time in the school, he was playing a zombie apocalypse game known as Armory: Dead Zone Protocol.
While playing it, there was a scream from the outside. Zombies came out from nowhere and were on a rampage, killing every student on sight. As he was attempting to flee, he tripped and knocked himself out.
When he woke up, he found himself inside of a bloodied classroom and a floating holographic interface. And it was familiar. It was the same interface in the game he was playing.
There, he realized that he had somehow gained access to an in-game system where he could level up, gain experience points, and purchase a variety of weapons, from handguns to military vehicles. And he is going to use it to survive and possibly save humanity from extinction.
P.S: This is my first time writing a novel, so if there's a mistake you found, grammar, punctuation or any errors, please comment it so I can fix it. I was inspired to write this novel because I binged-watch a lot of zombie series like All of us are Dead, Zom 100, High School of the Dead, World War Z, and other related apocalypse story like the Alice in Borderland.
I hope you guys enjoy!
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you sacrificed the intelligence of the mc and the quality of the book to build a harem it hurts my head to keep reading.
Mc plays zombie games but still makes simple mistakes. Mc decided to shoot one zombie instead of sneak killing it. The calculation of skill point and exp when being used or gather isn't adding up right . Mc has low intelligence
Can you make Riku's five best friends as survivors squad? If Riku has created his survive army, he'll fight for survivors around the world and for humanity. Also, have the zombies hatch into squads from eggs, like in "Zombies in the World." {That would be really cool if you wanted to expand this into more of an adventure.}
We need more chapters I wonder if his system will show a loyalty percentage so he can give guns to others without worry
Your portrait in the novel you wrote is so cool, I can't wait to see other people join Riku's forces and form an army to fight the zombies. [Just like John Conner saved the people and formed an army to fight the Teminators] [And Grace saved people from despair and mutual murder] [img=Feeling it][img=Smitten]
The beginning wasn’t bad. A system revolves around making a organization/military but then after the helicopter it’s like you gave up on the system. The characters keep complaining about fuel or other logistical problems when they all could be bought from the system. If gas was sold on the system than MREs can be too. The vehicle he bought that is basically on its last leg could be rebought/customized. Your not building character development your breaking them down. You also wrote like the first raider team from the resort was a big threat to then throw out that plot from some kinda of umbrella corp org making a super hive zombies. And then bam time skip he’s not using the system but they have unlimited weapon ammo and lost a important character from the group that no one talks about but keeps saying hope they have flowers. 9 months in the apocalypse and he still hasn’t told them about the system.
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It's Bad atm ngl im not even on the mood to tell you a detailed review, at chapter 80 rn and so far it's a dissapointmenr, I won't spoil but at chapter 80, all that effort to grow a community, gone in an instant, MC is lacking in a lot of department but atleast he is a decent MC, I'm more dissapointed with the Author and the story, if the phrase "it could've beeb better" was a Novel it would be this. Sorry not sorry
I was really drawn to the way you build tension and emotion. As someone who creates comics, I could easily picture this story as a visual series. I’m new here and would genuinely value your feedback on this.
I couldn’t get this scene out of my head, I actually feel like sketching it! Would you mind if I try a small panel based on it? I’m new to the platform and would really appreciate your thoughts on it.
Can you make Riku summon army in system? Like this👇 soldier in uniform