Monstrous Hero (Fan-fic with same name will be my future upload source

LV 4

TinyBookDragon

A fun read if a bit unrealistic on people's reactions to the MC needing to eat people. I know this isn't DC where killing is a big nono but I feel like the Avengers took it a bit casually.

LV 14

Nevermindthename

So much for talking about Batman's dedication to keeping his identity secret and choosing the willpower option. Besides your scene transitions are abrupt. End previous scene with some finality. Ease into new scenes properly. The way it is, it takes a moment to realise that previous scene has ended. There's too much tell and no show, no descriptions of surroundings to give a picture of what's happening, no describing (subtly, being obvious as describing angry, happy etc is again all tell and no show) character expressions. It's all I did this, then did that. Just stuffing the reader with it. Expound more, let readers make sense of what's happening from the text. Need to work on dialogues as well. Dialogues should give us an inkling of characters, their thought process, personality. The dialogues here are just present for the sake of it.

LV 14

Lazren_Inkheart

I've recently read all of your fics besides the dropped one, and honestly, this is the one I liked the least. I just can't get over the reactions or, more accurately, non-reactions of everyone to his eating people. Maybe if the setting was after Endgame, you could somewhat believe it, but at this point in the timeline, the reactions seem completely out of character. Honestly, with the reincarnation part at the start of the fic, if you just make it something like, people are more inclined to be accepting of his abilities. Although it would be hamfisted, it makes more sense.Honestly, that's the only problem. Grammatically, there's basically no issues. The writing style is very engaging, and character work outside of the above-mentioned problem is really good. While there are obvious wish fulfilment aspects, that's true in any fanfic, and here it's done in a really readable and digestible manner. Overall, it's very good and you're a good author because I like your other works even better. The only other possible note is to be careful of burnout it looks like you're updating 4 stories at the moment, and while as reader, I love all the content, trust me as an audience we much prefer slower updates and less stressed author that completes their work, than one who uploades until they can't and then stops posting altogether.Take care of yourself.

LV 15

1stDrunkenImmortal

👍👍👍👍👍. I like it

𝐇𝐞𝐲, 𝐈 𝐣𝐮𝐬𝐭 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐞𝐝 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐰𝐨𝐰. 𝐇𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐭𝐥𝐲, 𝐢𝐭 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐬𝐨 𝐯𝐢𝐯𝐢𝐝, 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐡𝐨𝐥𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐲𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐢𝐧 𝐦𝐲 𝐡𝐞𝐚𝐝 𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐥𝐞 𝐈 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝. 𝐈’𝐦 𝐚𝐧 𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐬𝐭, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐈 𝐮𝐬𝐮𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐭𝐚𝐤𝐞 𝐨𝐧 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐦𝐢𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐖𝐞𝐛𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐧𝐬, 𝐂𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐜𝐬, 𝐌𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐚, 𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐀𝐫𝐭, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐂𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐀𝐫𝐭. 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐡𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐭𝐥𝐲, 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐡𝐚𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐬𝐩𝐚𝐫𝐤 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐚𝐛𝐬𝐨𝐥𝐮𝐭𝐞𝐥𝐲 𝐬𝐭𝐮𝐧𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐚𝐬 𝐚 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐜 𝐨𝐫 𝐰𝐞𝐛𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐧 👀. 𝐈’𝐝 𝐛𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐞𝐱𝐜𝐢𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐭𝐨 𝐛𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐢𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐢𝐟𝐞 𝐯𝐢𝐬𝐮𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 (𝐧𝐨 𝐩𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐮𝐫𝐞, 𝐨𝐟 𝐜𝐨𝐮𝐫𝐬𝐞, 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐈 𝐜𝐨𝐮𝐥𝐝𝐧’𝐭 𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐬𝐭 𝐭𝐫𝐲𝐢𝐧𝐠). 𝐈𝐟 𝐲𝐨𝐮’𝐝 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐭𝐚𝐤𝐞 𝐚 𝐥𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐚𝐭 𝐦𝐲 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐤, 𝐨𝐫 𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐦𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐚𝐛𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐢𝐝𝐞𝐚, 𝐟𝐞𝐞𝐥 𝐟𝐫𝐞𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐜𝐡 𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐨𝐧 𝐃𝐢𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐫𝐝 👉 𝐛𝐞𝐧𝐧𝐞𝐭𝐭_𝐥𝐨𝐥 𝐋𝐨𝐨𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐰𝐚𝐫𝐝 𝐭𝐨 𝐡𝐞𝐚𝐫 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐮𝐠𝐡𝐭𝐬!

LV 5

khazar

this is quite prefect a prefect pace but it has some illogical reaction At least on Peter and aunt may side but ever thing else is great