/ 奇幻言情 / My Amazing Succubus Class
摘要
What would you do if you woke up and were trapped in the body of a reverse succubus?
Lily woke up in the body of a succubus and with it came something called a system.
She discovered that she had a unique skill but it required her to sleep with a new man each time for her to benefit from it and it couldn't be just any man.
When she finds out that the succubus clan is looked down upon and that everyone is afraid of them she runs away and hides in a bush?
Hell no!
She just builds her own army of succubus!
If she was already trapped in a succubus body she might as well play dirty from the start.
Meet the shameless Lily, the succubus!
*If you expect hardcore LitRPG with boss farming then you should look elsewhere. My story is progression so it's built up slowly so it needs patience to read and the main plot is NOT about gaming but it has only game elements.*
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This story leaves me with mixed feelings. I love the protagonist (the only truly important character), while the other characters are one-dimensional. I like how the story progresses, but it doesn't have an ending... I think the author preferred to continue with other stories. It has spicy scenes that don't fall into the obscenity... The author writes well, but I think she needs to revise the text to avoid some repetitive elements and some scenes that need contextualization... As I said, she knows how to write, but the text needs revision. The strange world with its system conflicts is very interesting, something I hadn't seen in these isekais... things aren't right and the protagonist fights against the world, not against specific villains (which also exist). Perhaps the best thing is that everything is liberated... I enjoyed it, so I recommend it, but you have to know that it has some flaws... It left me wanting more; I hope I pick it up again in the future.