摘要
Haruto Kuramoto was supposed to move to another world with his classmates, but only he failed to move and only his soul came to God.
As God apologized, I wondered if Haruto Kuramoto was crazy about it, so that he could use the abilities of the FPS game and reincarnate.
He who starts from reincarnation? The adventure has begun.
P.S. This novel is google translated.
I don't own any of this, for fun purpose only
Author: Blue sky bonito
Chapters: 173 Chapters and is still ongoing
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3.8
- 寫作品質
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- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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interesting story but man, do you need to think about who the author is talking about. they really need to work on their personal adjectives.
Can I have the raw? At least the real name? I can't seem too find it! I'm really interested in reading it even if I have to pay money.......
translation is god awful and sometimes almost impossible to read, but what can be read is pretty good. Other than a few interesting character traits most of the characters seem to be what should be expected of the genre.
it's not bad in terms of the story it self but I think you should at least go over what you write as if you did you maybe able to see that it is very difficult to read properly some of the time and others it is fine. I get confused and end up reading a whole chapter over multiple times to make sure I didn't misread anything.
Terrible translation, some chapters are impossible to read at all or they lack logic, but the chapters where the plot develops are very interesting to read.
Writing Quality ⭐ Story Development ⭐⭐ Character Design ⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability ⭐⭐⭐⭐ World Background ⭐⭐⭐ ..............................
atrocious grammer, interesting concept, poor execution. i hereby pass my judgement on yet another novel that didnt make the cut. 2.4 stars for this.
Can I have the raw name... I feel like I'd have much better luck reading that. ........................................................................................... .......... ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I had a stroke trying to read this but I'm trying my best to understand it because it has a good story line. The only bad thing is the writing.