摘要
The day he took the hat, Konoha was an inch from ruin.
His predecessor lay dead on a foreign battlefield. The village coffers were empty. And enemies circled like vultures, waiting for the Leaf to fall.
Hiruzen Sarutobi was handed a legacy of fire and blood, a village destined for a slow, agonizing decline. Everyone expected him to be a wartime Hokage. Everyone expected him to sacrifice a generation to buy a few more years of fragile peace.
But this Sarutobi was... different.
[Task: Stabilize the Village.]
[Objective: Neutralize Internal Threats.]
[Ultimate Goal: Forge an Unbreakable Foundation.]
For years, he watched his closest friend, Danzō Shimura, hunger for the darkness, believing power grew only from the shadows. He saw clans plotting for influence and a council content with the old ways of war.
So he offered Danzō a new kind of darkness. Not the darkness of the assassin's blade, but the darkness of the treasury ledger. Not the secrets of men, but the secrets of logistics and supply.
Ninjutsu can win a battle.
Strategy can win a war.
But infrastructure... infrastructure builds an empire.
The age of the God of Shinobi is over.
The era of the Architect has begun.
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i once again bring you raw - Naruto: The Beginning of the Tearful Succession to the Sandaime 火影：开局含泪接任三代目 i like it, it not perfect but its a ff. give it a try
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This is a four solid but id like the two stars review .Anyway the mc is normal ,good resolución of problems there are a few problems with the few información about years and age but is fine .
Quite good, happy to see a good kingdom building naruto fanfic!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
was so sick of fanfics where it's always fighting. like it that he is changing konoha not repeating hiruzens mistake. it would be even more good if he develops konoha technology. author san don't drop it.[img=Loving it]
ok so when I first read the book I liked it and was enjoying the story but after chp 40 something, then it was downfall like I'm not saying it unreadable, like it's good but not to my liking as first it was such good shonen type then suddenly it's slice of life
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well deserved 5 stars tbh, even though i hate hiruzen with my guts in other novels, i can't get myself to do it in this one yet which is good.
Wtf....This is how a fanfic should be written.I saw the title and thought it was a good concept.I never thought i would be this hooked. It has been so long since i read a Feel Good fanfic unlike the usual emo Mc who acts cool and female characters flock to him like he is the last man on earth or the Lazy Mc who tries to make jokes but all it does is irritate the readers. And thankfully none of those Chinese cringey cliches. The only part i found slightly irritating was the constant praise "with his god level prediction" which felt too Chinese. Apart from that this was one of the best fanfic in this platform. Please upload regularly and don't stop.
Hey! Your story really stood out, it’s full of personality and feels like it’s already halfway to being visual. I’m a freelance comic artist, and I’d love to bring a story like yours to life through my commissioned work. If you’d like to chat ideas or just see my art, I’m on Discord (harper_clark) or Instagram (_harperr_).
this is ridiculously good, the story develoment is peak 5/5 the writing quality is good,not perfect but very good 5/5. now.....the character is kind of weird,but the good kind of weird i like how the author keeps the origninal hiruzen emotions, but he feels.....odd i feel like the author should make some romance chapter(not 18+ chapters i mean like a date or dinner with his wife) i wonder what you will do with Asuma and the other og children of hiruzen,i woukd love to see him be a father, because i cant see the MCs personality give him more emotion he feels dull when hes with his wife, overall 3/5, will change with more chapters. the world backround.....i dont know how to rate it since there are too little chpaters and there isn't more dialogue with characters outside the village. its overall a good story, if your looking for a kingdom buliding story with a character with decent morals and maybe a family on the side its for you , 8/10 story
Previous two 5 star rating is undeserving. This novel is not that good, in my opinion.