/ 奇幻 / Null Reincarnation - Return Of The Fourth Primordial
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In a pitch-black void, a creature regains consciousness after centuries of sensory deprivation. Initially resigned to despair, a sudden flash of light brings hope, and the creature discovers itself now occupying the body of a young noble named Arlen Vesper. Revitalized, Arlen prepares for a journey into a fantasy world filled with magic, sorcery, and dungeons. However, before fully embracing this new existence, Arlen is determined to uncover the identities of those who imprisoned him in the void.
Note: I kinda messed up when locking the chapters, originally I wanted to close off at around chapter 33 but I accidentally set it to one chapter before that. If you do end up reading this story, then I'd like to hear your thoughts on it up to that point. You can share them in the form of a review, mentioning what you did and didn't like about the story, I'll try to get through as many of them as possible. - cosmicslime
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Amazing writing style. This right here is pro level writing, I’m speachless. There are no mistakes, it’s smooth and addictive, there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment and I took a liking in Arlen, I can say he is a well written character. I genuinely enjoyed the story. 10/10 I’d gladly do as many reviews as needed. Leave one under mine novel and I’ll track you down and help you with yours 😉
I'm not letting that writing slide. That is some pretty top-star writing, no doubt about it, and the development is amplified by this certain style.
The author has a great grasp of the English language. The set up and the way he unveils the story so far deserves a thumbs up. I’d like to see if this is better than the typical cliches I read now a days
i have only read the early chapters but the story is very interesting if it goes the way I think its going then this should be a hit but there's something that I wonder if the author is gonna add will you explain about his past? any way the story has a lot of pontienalt and its very good start just don't rush it
This is really good! You got me hooked up in the first chapter and I even added it to my collection! I really recommend this for everyone to read even if it only has 13 chapters. It's amazing!
NGL i really got hook unto this novel. atlast a unique one that doesn't follow to the most template of leveling stories. the explanation of world background and character entrance had a really great effect on the story telling. Goodjob and will be waiting for more updates
I am a sucker for reincarnation and antiheroes combined. Am so sure the book will be very popular in the future. I love the book a lot. And I can't wait to see what happens next
The story presents an intriguing premise with the protagonist's journey from a desolate void to a new world. The writing is clear and engaging, making it easy to follow along. I'm curious to see how the character's quest for answers unfolds.
Your writing is impressive, creating a vivid and immersive experience. Arlen's awakening is well-described, capturing my attention. Adding a bit more context about the void would be good. Keep up the good work!
The potential of this novel is high. You should continue this and I'll guarantee you that this will get popular
Awesome story. To be honest... I'm a sucker for reincarnation, transmigration, rebirth stories, so I you already had me with the title. I think what piqued my was the 'antihero' tag. I gladly leave this book in my library:)
Author here - I'm open to all comments and suggestions since this is my first time writing a litrpg and system type novel. I think its turning out nicely so far but leave your comments so I can get a better idea of how well the story is being received.