Project: E.D.E.N {The Dome Experiment}

I’ve read a lot of stories, but Your storytelling is rich and immersive, and the way you capture emotion and setting makes it feel like a living world. I kept thinking how amazing it was, the tone, pacing, and character moments all fit that format so naturally. This story really has the kind of depth and energy that could shine visually too. I also have a few Ideas on how we could enhance it visually if you are open to exploring them, we can talk about it.

I think your story can improve a lot with just a simple change the story line is absolutely amazing but i thing what it needs is a professional cover for it which can enhance the visual appearance of the story what do u think if we discuss this ?

The action is very interesting 🥳🥸they should continue to survive and not die of🙂‍↕️.they are good character's all of them unique in their own way

Loving the suspense and mystery! and also the irony of the situation is so interesting 🤔. Rory is my fav character 😂