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After spending nineteen years in the Naruto world and surviving the Second Great Ninja War, the protagonist sees the Third Great Ninja War looming on the horizon.
Finally, the system activates.
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The RAW 我都上忍了，系统才来
This is a translation work; I do not own it.
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The fic is good , but it's the third time I'm reading it on this site from different author
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I had read it till chapter 10 in patreon, it pretty good to me, love mc (personality, I guess 19 years trying his best survival ninja world without golden finger kinda do magic, his will, determination are all solid) oh btw author-San could u unlock ch11, ch13, ch14, ch15 in patreon pls it locked [img=update]
mf. good thing there's this novel being translated. the yamanaka trait system that has 150+ chapter got deleted. fcccccccck!
觉醒转生眼，做忍界的幕后黑手 this different book what author what raw?............................................................................................................................
I really liked the first chapters, the character, Shinno's inner monologues and his vision and caution, persistent training. After activating the system, everything only got worse, he just got everything from nothing without effort, skills, techniques, experience, this book and the whole story turned into banal jokes and the inadequacy of the entire "Naruto" world! A typical character with a broken system that destroys the entire atmosphere of this fictional world, if you are an ardent fan of this universe and you have nothing to read, this is your project where you don't need to turn off your advanced brain😏 An overrated book as can be seen by the rating and quality of the story😐
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first 100 episodes were good, but after that the quality was dropped .........................................
2nd or 3rd time i read this ff, i hope it doesn't get deleted this time. strongly recommend reading
Pretty good story, entertaining and fun to read. No real complaints about it aside from the last chapters after 200 just going into full xianxia nonsense out of nowhere, completely ruined the mood tbh. Other than that it pretty solid
This is a nice story with an excellent translation, unfortunately I still chose to drop at the chapter 110 two main reasons. The first reason for that is because the flow of the story is too bad and not entertaining. It's quite hard to understand what's going on and often times I believe there are parts missing from the translation or the author can't write a straight line scene/plot. And the second main reason I choose to drop it is that when the MC became powerful he still chose to enter Root, all so he could avoid political trouble. Saying that if he became Hokage he would have to work hard everyday so he just wants to be lazy and goof his days. Then it became clear to me the MC doesn't really have a goal in life and he just goes by everyday, which was very disappointing for me as I don't like reading those types of fanfic wear there is no point in the story.
This is a pretty good translation, only a few errors I remember seeing. Fun story, nothing really serious. MC destroys canon, especially since his system rewards it. MC gets really OP
great book. read pretty much until the end of the 'main' story. excellent writing kept me gripped throughout with good jokes. it never missed a beat and was always fun to read.
It's okay, not really worth the patreon for the full thing. lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
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super, love this story, if you stop translating van you send me a link to thé original or o complete translation xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
I was interested at first but evenually got bored. A lot of chapters that i tend to skip because its not usefull to the plot progress. The mc's personality isnt something i personaly like either
The fanfic is quite good and unusual. If you liked it. I will be very grateful for your feedback, when we get 10 reviews, the fanfic will get a rating. The best review will be pinned