摘要
Kane transmigrates to a world of dungeons when he is playing game. Looking at the Book of Adventure in front of him, he realizes it is his System that is going to change his life in this world.
With the system that gives him the ability to extract skills from dead enemies, he embarks on quests in search of treasure and relics hidden in this world.
[Extracting...]
[Completed]
[Name: Spider Nest Weaver]
[Category: Active Skills]
[Explanation: Spend magic power/physical strength to release spider silk from the jet ports, the silk's strength determined by the energy spent, but there are certain limits]
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great story has a balanc system thatsnot to over powered only read a little bit but good so far
One of my daily reads on raw sites(see Eternal Angel's post of the name). It's a bit OP but not as much as most dungeon novels. Skip if you don't want the world view 'spoiled', but I won't cover storyline spoilers other than it appears to be a single female love interest for those worried about harems. Basically the world (implied to be a flat circle) he's living in has a 'god' called the Mist. That god rescues fragments of broken worlds from the void, transforms them into dungeons and explorers basically beat the fragment into submission. All the people in the lower level dungeons are 'stored' and copies fight the explorers. It's not clear yet about higher level dungeons. There's a lot more details but that's the basic idea.
Reasonably intelligent MC, not overpowered, no face-slapping every other chapter. Why do the good stories like this one never get picked??? Instead it's just the same old garbage for the most part :(
the premise isn't bad. but the writing style got on my nerves. many times it's 3rd person narration but from right over the shoulder of the MC, as if someone is doing live reporting from a television program. but then suddenly another character is describing something in past tense while in a present scene. quite a few times you'll see sentences that are grammatically incorrect/incomplete. this needs a serious edit. I only made it about 21 chapters before dropping the book for that reason. if you can overlook the grammar and writing style, it's not a bad novel. for me though, it's what is stopping the novel from being really good.
Better than the slop novels. Unfortunately, the MCs cheat has a teammate function and it’s likely his team will be permanent. The MC has a fast growth speed which is made faster due to his overpowered cheat enhancing his strength. That means his team will also advance at a pace far faster than all other natives, even though he gathered them in a short time at a border city. It’s very weird when the MC is just another team member, yet he uses his cheat to enhance the potential of the rest of the team from geniuses of a small place, to far eclipsing everyone else.
This is a really good book… Few wasted words …no excessive exposition… And just enough humor…worth the read.
loved it. the plot is easy and fun to read. the MC is not OP. But his strong enough to stand his ground. the story is a bit slow but love the fighting scenes. MC is cool headed and a bit navie maybe his still new. His fighting skills are more crowed control and support type which is rare to most MC fighting style.
Overall a very enjoyable plot and idea. It feels like a very free RPG and I like the idea of that. I can envision the world well and the story progresses at a reasonable pace. The writing can be a bit sloppy at times, but I think the other aspects makes up for it.
The MC has no personality at all, the plot is boring, and the setting is unoriginal. All in all, give it a read if his cheat interests you (it's not great either), but come prepared to regret it.
some might think the mc has no personality I'm ok with that , after reading countless young master MCs this novel is a breadth of fresh air , a great novel to improve your mood