/ 游戏 / Skill Maker in a Game Like World
摘要
Fifty years ago, the world changed forever when Earth was mysteriously connected to the Primordial World, a reality that operates like a game.
This world can only be entered by Awakeners—people who have awakened with special powers. However, out of fifteen billion humans, only one million have this privilege.
Enzo, a poor young man with no connection to the Primordial World, should have had no chance of becoming an Awakener.
However, against all odds, he awakens... and more than that, he gains an innate skill unheard of before—the ability to make skills with only his imagination.
In a world where power determines everything, how will a nameless young man carve his own path?
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Story could have been better. MC is arrogant in a negative sense. I don't understand where all those Intelligence stats are going, because he acts just as ignorant as in the begining, even with his increase in intelligence. I guess the author has used intelligence stat only to help with creation of additional skills
why don't he add points to his physical attributes he is making a weakness for himself cause of plot
I had high hopes when I started and I still plan on reading it because I bought the chapters but I can’t say I’m not disappointed. I don’t like the direction the mc is going when it comes to the romantic relationships and feel it is just turning into a direction that I feel is quite forced. Also the mc seems to just act like a wild animal when it comes to women atm. I’ll keep reading and change my review if I feel it changes. Going for his Brothers girlfriend, really right after getting married to a beautiful woman that cares about him. All because she ended up wanting him, he really didn’t have the moral compass or the will power to say no. Also saying he’s not close with his brother because he annoys him even tho they grew up in a slum together and his brother uses his status as a gang leader to protect his brother. It just doesn’t make sense. This ima teach my brother a lesson by traumatising him because I’m powerful now is just so pathetic. What’s he even teaching his brother a lesson for. There’s no animosity between them until now, just normal sibling squabbling. Also talking about how awfully his brother treats women and then going to cheat on his wife right after getting married… come on.
It's not bad. The author has a grasp on storytelling, but the Asian "Brother Enzo" and "sister Ruby" in a supposedly Western setting gave me flashback icks. The English is a bit awkward, and there's the odd grammar mistake, but nothing dreadful. The world building is decent, but as others say, the interpersonal interactions don't feel natural. They are stiff. I had to laugh at the "uniform". What make a transparent plastic swimsuit a uniform? But somehow, it has a pouch to put things in? I mean other than what you would expect to find in a swimsuit "pouch", wink, wink.
the mc is starting to be arrogant just being awaken.. he comes from nothing he should be smart enough not to get it in his head..and start building his self 1st.
mc is a total douche bag he's the kind of person I wish to get cucked cause he deserves it. he awakens gets some power and starts treating everyone like shit, yet he is the type to cry about unfairness when someone else treats him badly not to mention he is so passive and basically a bit on the lower side of intelligence even though that's where he dumps his points.