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Watch as Alex Rise Survive in the World of Starship troopers with a Warhammer 40k system, will he be the hero of the Federation or will he die as a nameless Soldier in the Fight against the bugs. And a Battle for the multiverse.
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Starship troopers timeline
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Warhammer 40k (currently writing.)
Note: I do not own the Content of the Starship troopers Franchise or The Warhammer 40k Content. I have received permission from the Dawn of War Modding Community to use their assets in this fanfic.
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Pretty good novel qnd Unique i realy love this. Updates are little bit unstable but you can survive. Also author use complicated words that i need to check on google what they meaning is. But overall good. P.S. Read your selfs if wanna know the story
I'm sure in whatever the native language of the author this makes more sense. However, this is barely readable in English. Sentences are capitalized every other word. You will see sentences that say, " Wow How you Know You amazing!" and that's the least of the grammatical sins. I'm sure there is a plot buried under there somewhere, but it's too painful to find.
Honestly I have an hard time enjoying this story. The whole back and forth between 40k and starship trooper is kind of breaking my immersion for the story. Wished you made two stories rather than 1.
i was expecting starship troopers world and the rest are extra spice tech procurement you should change the title 🧐 the novel in a more appropriate cause this novel contains almost all Warhammer so far while the starship troopers as main world was treated as fast word type I'll change my review once i readt it whole I'm currently at the half its not it's not bad the title turn it bad
no space marine ??? then bye for now maybe in future when I had more time to waste I come back to read warhammer that had no space marine
This thing is stupid. Why would God get them broken abilities to They can destroy the world?
In general, everything is fine, but the grammar is a little lame, there are words that are not clear, but otherwise everything is great, thanks for the translation. I am writing with the help of a translator .
The writing quality needs some work but not too bad honestly, story development is pretty good and immersive, best fictional fanfic I've read so far.I highly suggest this for Warhammer fans and all readers out there.
Great book . It has elements of Warhammer, RimWorld, etc. As luck would have it I read from the translations so I don't judge the grammar.
over all this is a good story to read a bit bad here and there with the grammer not the spelling the way the words are put together in order to form a sentance espically in those older chapters other than that its a good read
Thank you for the update, loved the story development and character setting so far. And maybe in the future, the adeptus mechanicus will create the skiitari rangers, castelan robots, and skorpius disentigrator tanks to help fight against the arachnids' faction!!!!. I can also imagine the reactions from the terran federation towards the imperial guard and the adeptus mechanicus (tech-priests).
it's a good story and can i have a question author are you going to add marvel or dc just a question
This is another reason why there should be no civil war. The Sky Marshal wanted to gain political support in order to gain more power for the war. It would be funny, Ironic and a bit of karmic just if instead that our character gains the public and political support to the point that he is the unquestioned leader of the Federation. If we have a civil war then there will still be doubts. The treacherous Sky Marshal is literally giving us power on a silver plate.
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Hey, I just finished reading your story and honestly the whole thing was pretty much playing in my head. The vibes you created are no joke, it felt ready to jump out of the pages. I’m a commission artist, and I do comics, manga, and webtoons for authors who want to see their work visualized. And no exaggeration, your story has the potential to be a hit as a webtoon. No pressure, but if you wanna see your words turn into visuals, I would be delighted to do it. Hit me up on Discord (eve_verse) to discuss further. Regards, Evelyn
The fanfiction has an interesting and promising idea, but the reading experience is hindered by the convoluted writing style. There are many unnecessary and lengthy sentences that can confuse readers and divert attention away from the actual content. The author should strive to express their thoughts more clearly and concisely in order to provide a pleasant reading experience. Nonetheless, the story is appealing and has the potential to become a real pleasure to read with some revision