摘要
[CRITICAL ERROR: NARRATIVE COHESION COMPROMISED.] [SUBJECT: 'FATELESS'. STATUS: DISCONNECTED.] [INITIATING PROTOCOL: REINTEGRATION.]
The Third Nightmare ended in victory, and the world forgot the price. But the Spell remembers.
Four years after the cohort’s return, the Nightmare Spell begins to scream.
It does not speak in runes of reward or punishment, but in errors. In a single instant, the Sovereigns, the Cohort, and key figures from history are torn from reality — not to a Nightmare, but to the Loom of Fate itself.
Trapped in a void of severed golden strings, they must solve a puzzle: Who is the blurred figure appearing in all their historical records?
The Loom of Fate is unraveling, and the only way to stitch it back together is to walk the path of the one being the Spell cannot control.
Welcome to the archive of Lost from Light.
Artwork by Ignoramoose.
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I appreciate your spirit, I'm glad I know the SS fan community is growing, perhaps it's your first time writing so I have some advice that you should reread your work often because every time you read it, you realize your shortcomings. I hope to see the end, good luck, don't disappoint your readers.
The story has potential and has a good enough idea behind it that I can already smell the indefinite hiatus coming out of nowhere. The idea of the reactions will actually affect the canon storyline, hopefully making for something interesting.