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T.O.T.U.L TALES OF THE UNDEFEATED LEGEND [DROPPED] & (REMADE) UNTIL FURTHER A DUE. I WILL BE DROP THIS AND MADE NEW AND MUCH BETTER ONE. TQ FOR SUPPORTING ME
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English is not my 2nd language, so...ya..im sorry if apart of it you lot can't understand it. I'm so sorry.
This story is about a child [MC] Feng Xiong that grew up from child to teenagers and spent his time every day inward inside a hospital due to his illness, He is a child with heart cancer and it's already staged 4.
The only thing that he can do is play a game from his phone and what's more, He is using a cheat engine with it, well everything is to remove his boredom. When his time finally came, he smiled as he spoke, "So this is it".
Closing his eyes as he accepted his fate, he sighed and laid flatly on the bed.
But to his surprise, when he opened his eyes, what he first saw is a wide space and everything is white, then a voice came as a silhouette appeared, A handsome man spoke to him as He said:"
Who are you? ask MC
???? - "your people usually call me God".
Let's watch and see how our MC will handle his new found life!.
Join us Here at Tales Of The Undefeated Legend. And follow his journey to a new path and become a legend.
tags: #WeakToStrong, #Brotherhood, #MilitaryFaction, Remix #FanFiction
DROPPED UNTIL NEW DATE AND NEW REMAKE TQ.
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More more more it really is a very great novel and plz mass release.....................................................mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Really great novel even with the grammatical errors which I hope can be improved on...the mc still follow some of earth rules and conditioning even with his system and sad background and not turning into a wild beast hungry for power with lots of women and not giving a **** about anybody but himself....pls no harem just focuse on the mc changing the world for the better will not bring scientific technology to this world plz if u want romance then u can talk about mc and his wife who has captured his soul
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I already have a look through the story, I have to say, it does have great potential, all you need to do is flesh out the world a bit more and do a bit of spacing on each paragraph and it would look great.
Hi, guys, i am the author of this novel, I'm still writing in a book, after a littlele bit change the word and storyline i will publish it, I'm sorry if I've done something that made one of you angry with me I'm so sorry, I'm just a newbie trying to seek a new experience.
Hi! I've read your story and really liked it! But it is sad for me not to find any of your social medias to talk with you. As a reader, i hopw i can talk with you about the book. The plots, characters and settings all bring me such a fantastic reading experience. I can understand you are busy with your novel. But i hope we can have a chance to communicate with each other.