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Waking up as Stuart Bloom in 2007 was supposed to be a sentence to a life of depression and poverty, but the Void didn't send him back empty-handed. Armed with three supernatural gifts—future knowledge, industry magnetism, and success-based charisma—the new Stuart transforms the Comic Center of Pasadena from a sad dungeon into a Hollywood hotspot
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Idea was good but plot development lags, the way MC enters panic mode whenever someone gets suspicious about his knowledge is boring, not to mention this happens too frequently and its he the one that always drop a spoiler and then worrying about others finding his lead. So overall the plot is all about MC using and spoiling his future knowledge reckless and then worrying about others finding it and it su*ks.
I love this idea of this book. My only complaint is why make it so anxiety filled for Stuart, let him enjoy the moment. And if he is scared of sharing his insights, why share it at all ? why not keep things to himself. It's like reading about an ML who has PTSD and anxiety together. It gets tiring after a point.
Man... I wanted to be nice, there aren't many TBBT fanfics out there, I was hoping to strike gold but... Constant mistakes, the MC's paranoia and the character's nonsensical actions. I mean, the protagonist only mentioned that Bitcoin could be a usable currency in the future, acted a little more confidently and bought a large quantity of The Walking Dead comics, but that made Leonard and Sheldon look like two detectives thinking there was something very wrong with Stuart. It didn't seem realistic at all.
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This is a frustrating read, I was quite interested with the premise but its poorly executed.
MC panicking too much it's becoming boring. You know, a secret stays a secret if you tell no one. MC yapping about everything from bitcoin to iPhone to his friends defeat the purpose of being low-key. I like the emotional connection of the story and the way they interact, it's organic. But in reality you won't trigger Treasury Dept just for that small of investment. It was small because he didn't have the capital to go in big. That's the illogical part of the plot, if the MC going to broadcast his moves to his friends why keep his secret a secret? This story has potential but stuck with illogical character development.
whatever stuart gained in physicality he lost in his mentality. The point of this novel was a stuart without issues but the author forces new issues on him.
has been written with heavy ai aid and little to no manual editing done afterwards which in my opinion ruins a good concept. these are repeated sections from the lack of ai memory like people regressing and lines being repeated twice a chapter.
Great Concept, Poor Execution. confusing timelines, exaggerated existential dread, poor plot development. The only good thing about this fic is the grammar.
You're killing the potential of this story with this stupid "Leonard is gonna find out I'm from another universe" plot line. It negates his friendship. He's not doing drugs he's not acting arrogant or erratic. Stuart is becoming the best Stuart he can be. And somehow that makes Leonard think there is something wrong???? This means ANY success and change for the better in his friends is unacceptable in his narrow world view. That people becoming their best selves is somehow a problem for him cause then he can't see them as inferior people to him anymore. The examples he give is Stuart becoming interested in bitcoin and his comic shop not struggling to even make a profit......... and thats somehow make Stuart suspicious????? This is normal everyday shit.
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start was good but why is the predicting a bad thing itsnot that it not happened in real live so this is absolutely boring plot
This story always leaves me eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Finally, we have a truly decent Big Bang Theory fanfic. I just hope this one doesn't fall like the others.
over all good some few miss stups but not a dumpster fire give it a shot and see if you like it
I kinda feel what the author is trying to do... But getting to the point where MC accepts his current reality and treat everyone as actual people... additional info you didn't stalk out of people is out of MC's control. So it is a bit frustrating to read about MC's btchng over and over about it. I mean even irl, you could know and discover stuff about the people around you that you'd pretend you didn't know until they tell it themselves ... And keeps forgetting the fact that everything MC knows about the cast if from the show where Stuart is just himself not a mix, so everything falls as just a reference not fate. As for additional future knowledge, you ain't doing anything wrong or illegal....so what would cause such guilt even the og Stuart would never act that way. ..... But all of this is just my personal opinion about the fanfic. And still hoping for more or faster updates... Also please do tell if the unwarranted guilt would last for more than 5 more chapters....
Was looking forward to something interesting but the plot is contrived, feels almost like someone cleaned up an ai prompt, deleted the back log and later reinserted the prompt. Some plotlines repeat themselves so it kind of takes you out of the atmosphere.
The best Big Bang Theory fanfic in web novel so far. While it has some clichés and redundant elements, it shows great potential overall. The character interactions feel real and natural, and the protagonist also has potential, although he often seems hesitant to interact due to his meta-knowledge (I hope this gets addressed). There's also the question of whether anyone will notice Stuart's unusual behavior, actions, and knowledge, but if that happens, I hope it's not forced or anticlimactic like it often is in other fics. I hope this fic has many more chapters.
it is a stuart the comic book shop guy si fic currently it is basically a bit before the season or at the first season mc is using the semi-irl stuff to buy and make it big currently frontline love interest is penny which is ok the story could be expanded upon more like buying stocks, since there is still the konomai and upper deck fiasco alongside the elemental hero air neos fiasco as well
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This is trash with potential. You have the potential and the tools to deliver quality, but you hold back or don't know how to express yourself well. You overcomplicate things, and that makes readers frustrated because we don't expect to read about a protagonist who is constantly insecure, sacrificing their second chance for others whom they've only seen on screen. That's the problem: they worry so much about others that they lose focus (or lose the point). You try, according to you, to give it realism, but that makes it lose realism. I don't know if my opinion matters to you, but if this changes, let me know, send a comment so I can continue reading, because it has future (or potential).