摘要
Grew up an orphan and had to join the knights, swore to protect people so they didn't have to suffer what I did. Eventually succeeded at the cost of my life, and was offered a new life but there was a catch. I was cursed to become a spider, and now I'm just trying to find my way again with my first ever friend in a new world.
Will have many of the same themes as my other story (GL, Fluff/Romance, Slice-of-Life, Progression)
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I'm giving this a 5/5. The pacing is good, the character interactions feel normal, and not robotic. The character design is clear and doesn't change from what we've been told. Updating is pretty good. I would definitely recommend this. Btw, I don't really write reviews a lot, so the fact that I am, shows how good this is.
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It's so sweet I feel like I need to see a dentist after every chapter. I recommend this to anyone who needs to brush more often, it will be a great reminder for y'all.
yeah read the first chapter and it was good our mc is a elf or some different race she will get human legs in the future chapter's good job author keep it up.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Very good story. Development may be too slow for some people and not enough action, but I love it as it is. There are „some“ very sweet scenes... hehe~
I really like it, keep up the good work![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I have read more than 100ch. This is my review : Slow relationship progression.. It's frustrating to see nothing happens between the leads. The evolutions were very lackluster, nothing unique between evolutions. Could have been better if the system message were indicated in a better way Overall ok read, would have loved if this was more fast paced . . . . . . .
Litrpg done right, relatable characters, helarious moments (mini mini spoIler: “looking at you dancing spider”) progression is at a perfect pace with the litrpg being fast while having a slow pased in depth progress of characters, relations and locations. Only reason world background is 4/5 is because the story has been isolated from the world (for now)
I love reading it so much and it is a plessure to follow their interactions. The characters are great and I am so invested in how the story will develop. Thank you for your work, I am so hyped for more ^^
this is a really good story with nice character design and story development. it's pretty slow but in a good way. don't know what to say so i'm just typing.
I really like the whole setting of the story, I also liked that her system works in a different way than most, and the protagonist's thoughts are always nice to follow. Keep up the good work
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Eh? It's pretty good. -someone who has read it religiously since the beginning As a side project, this is quite incredible. not the best thing I have read, but it's entertaining and you can see the growth of the author.
Best bloody book i've ever read Or should I say books because I've read your other one and its bloody amazing Keep up the good work and never forget that your a bloody amazing author
ok you got me hooked on this book to....at this rate I'll never get any sleep ...if you ever manage to finish this book then sell it on amazon too cos I want both....seriously you are now my favourite author!
ok I admit....this book is good too but I like your other one more....plz think about publishing it on amazon so I can officially buy it....
love it so much PLEASE don't DROP [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]