/ 漫画同人 / The Tale of Some Random Shinobi
摘要
Naruto fanfic. first 150 chapters are mostly slice of life.
No Harem
No Ecchi
No Romance
I do not own Naruto. All characters and concepts in the story belong to Masashi Kishimoto and others involved parties who hold the rights of the franchise.
chapters will drop whenever I am able to update.
Comments will not be answered and all reviews besides the already existing ones will be deleted.
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10評論
4.3
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I like it, but if you read it you must accept the fact that even if it is an isekai, it's not a perfect reincarnation, the MC basically still has a child's mind and got mental issues due to how his memories came back to him and probably some traumas that are still not much elaborated as of now (chapter 85 for WN),writing is pretty weird and often tends to go on tangents but is still acceptable
this is a well written story. the update was slow but as long as the writer didn't give up on writing this FanFiction and didn't sacrifice it's writing quality, story development and character design for writing speed. this novel will surely become popular.
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At first I thought it would be a simple ninja who lives a normal life, but the mc seems to have all kinds of op powers, it seems that there will be no romance, only Bromance, the mc only hangs out with naruto and sasuke everywhere, for the rest The MC wants to become the strongest, I don't know why, he isn't interested in many things, the growth of the story is slow, the MC is still a child.
It isn't bad I like it but the problem is that is too slow-paced paced even if it remains like that I won't stop reading it. currently, the ff has 194 chaps, and now will the Mc go with team 7 to help Tazuma build the bridge. team 7 is naruto, Homura (mc) and Sasuke.
I really like the no Harem/Romance aspect and I really want to like this story, but it was too slow for my taste. Chapter 24 and still not in the academy yet. And MC, god he ranting 24/7, I really want to like him but he just keeps babbling and ranting all the time. He was a grown-up reincarnated into a child body, so start acting like one, please. No offence to the author but I gave this story a try, but MC personalty is just no, no to me. Now I got why this story won't have romance, MC are so bad that I don't think anyone would wanna romantically involved with him.
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