/ 奇幻 / Ultimate Check-in System
摘要
In a world full of danger, a teenager awoke with the Check-in System.
No sense of danger? No sense of challenge?
No! His life will not be mediocre. He will rise above the sky, shining brighter than the stars.
In a world full of possibilities, he will become the absolute beacon of strength.
But all of these take time.
Time waits for no one! So, he will not wait for his opportunities. He will carve them himself.
This will be a journey of an ultimate cheater.
標籤
-- 收到的禮物 
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
𝐇𝐢, 𝐈 𝐣𝐮𝐬𝐭 𝐰𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐭𝐨 𝐭𝐞𝐥𝐥 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐡𝐨𝐰 𝐦𝐮𝐜𝐡 𝐈 𝐞𝐧𝐣𝐨𝐲𝐞𝐝 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲. 𝐈𝐭 𝐡𝐚𝐝 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐞𝐧𝐞𝐫𝐠𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐝 𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐦𝐞. 𝐘𝐨𝐮 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐚 𝐰𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐬𝐭𝐲𝐥𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐟𝐞𝐞𝐥𝐬 𝐧𝐚𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐬𝐮𝐢𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐚 𝐯𝐢𝐬𝐮𝐚𝐥 𝐦𝐞𝐝𝐢𝐮𝐦 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐚 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐜 𝐨𝐫 𝐰𝐞𝐛𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐧. 𝐈’𝐦 𝐚 𝐩𝐫𝐨𝐟𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐚𝐥 𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐬𝐭 𝐰𝐡𝐨 𝐭𝐚𝐤𝐞𝐬 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐦𝐢𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐖𝐞𝐛𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐧𝐬, 𝐦𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐚, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐜 𝐚𝐝𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐥𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠, 𝐈 𝐤𝐞𝐩𝐭 𝐢𝐦𝐚𝐠𝐢𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝 𝐮𝐧𝐟𝐨𝐥𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐢𝐧 𝐩𝐚𝐧𝐞𝐥𝐬. 𝐈𝐭 𝐡𝐚𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐫𝐚𝐫𝐞 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐛𝐢𝐧𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐨𝐧𝐞, 𝐞𝐦𝐨𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧, 𝐝𝐢𝐚𝐥𝐨𝐠𝐮𝐞 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐤𝐬 𝐯𝐢𝐬𝐮𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲. 𝐈’𝐝 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐛𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐢𝐟𝐞 𝐛𝐲 𝐦𝐚𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐢𝐭 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐨 𝐚 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐢𝐜 𝐨𝐫 𝐚 𝐰𝐞𝐛𝐭𝐨𝐨𝐧. 𝐍𝐨 𝐩𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐮𝐫𝐞 𝐢𝐟 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐚𝐫𝐞 𝐧𝐨𝐭 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐨 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐢𝐝𝐞𝐚, 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐢𝐟 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐚𝐫𝐞, 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐜𝐚𝐧 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐜𝐡 𝐦𝐞 𝐨𝐧 𝐃𝐢𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐫𝐝 (𝐞𝐯𝐞_𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐞) 𝐨𝐫 𝐈𝐧𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐠𝐫𝐚𝐦 (𝐞𝐯𝐞_𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐞_) 𝐭𝐨 𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐨𝐫 𝐬𝐞𝐞 𝐦𝐲 𝐚𝐫𝐭.
System is silent. Host is serious. It has action, adventure, character growth, kingdom building, and supernatural elements. Join the ride of Tyler Grant with his Check-in System