it is extremely generic tbh. first of all the character template is too boring with alot of cheats. and I swear I have read like 5 other fanfictions with the same principle of mixed bloodline so the uchiha shuns him which is so stupid because according to canon the uchiha are a clan of love and are extremely protective of their own, always the same generic plot of school then 3rd hokage notice then tsunade or orochimaru become teacher etc etc. I could tell without reading to the end of the novel that the plot will continue the same road as canon and the end boss will def be kaguya and the ninja war. it is in my opinion boring
didn't you read couple of chapters before that he intended to ride the wave so that shisui get disillusioned from the 3rd hokage?
Rēn let his anger fade. He didn't push back. As long as there was no formal punishment, he didn't care about being blamed. With the Hokage in charge, finding fault in someone like him was easy.
Naruto: The Flame That Reshapes Fate
漫画同人 · IDKjust
what does the author think he is talking about lol. Neji is most upset about the fate of the caged bird. I swear if Chinese authors weren't lusting and simping for Hinata to twist stuff up I wouldn't have to read such bs.
Stopping here, Mujie suddenly paused, then said with some confusion, "No, thinking carefully, Neji's hatred seems to be directed only at Hinata. As the genius of the Hyuga clan, he often trains one-on-one with Hinata. Every time they train, he beats Hinata black and blue. Even now, if you lift Hinata's clothes, you might find numerous bruises. But even according to his own thoughts, his real enemy should be Hinata's father, yet he has never resisted him..."
Naruto: This is the Uzumaki’s Revenge
漫画同人 · flokixy
I like the story. the mc is interesting enough and the dialogue doesn't seem stiff. but the biggest problem is the HAREM aspect of the story. I read 100 chapters ahead. the story would deviate for so many chapters just so the mc interacts with female characters. in only 50 chapters. Kurenai yagura Temari Mei Tsunade. and all of them had hints for flirting and some even fighting over him. it is actually just a loser wet daydreaming. also, the mc has no hatred or any desire for revenge although Konoha destroyed his clan? I hate this type of mcs the most. even if he has no connections to the clan. can't he even be pity to the fact they hunt him and tried to kill him? like why these characters are so open minded in fanfictions when it comes to konoha
i remember karin said it to sarada in boruto. the reason sasuke doesnt stay in the village
Had things followed the natural course, Naruto—the ultimate wildcard—would've eventually brought lasting peace to the villages.
Night of the Clan Massacre: Leading the Uchiha to Defect from Konoha!
漫画同人 · Euridome
yea he is just Hashirama 2.0 literally his reincarnation. even Sasuke has to keep away so that the other nations don't feel threatened by Konoha.
Had things followed the natural course, Naruto—the ultimate wildcard—would've eventually brought lasting peace to the villages.
Night of the Clan Massacre: Leading the Uchiha to Defect from Konoha!
漫画同人 · Euridome
all mangekyos are different. no pair is the same. like kamui one short range defensive and the other long range offensive.
Even though it was Kotoamatsukami, in the original story Danzo's version could only control someone like Mifune—and it was easily seen through and broken by Ao's Byakugan.
Night of the Clan Massacre: Leading the Uchiha to Defect from Konoha!
漫画同人 · Euridome
how naive to call the victims fighting back the spark lol
Faced with Uchiha Obito and Uchiha Itachi, who were about to unleash a slaughter, and the Konoha leadership watching hungrily from the shadows…
Night of the Clan Massacre: Leading the Uchiha to Defect from Konoha!
漫画同人 · Euridome
I mean logically speaking, it is implied multiple times that the uchiha coup in canon was not happening in vacuum. the suppression and targeting since the 2nd hokage rein and the tacit silence of the other clans speaks volumes. you have to remember that the uchiha clan was relocated once next to the prison away from the center of power in the 2nd hokage time. not to mention the senju renegading on their promise to madara becoming the hokage. not even giving 1 seat on the elder table to the founding clan is insaaaaane. not to mention that shisui and fogaku single handedly stopped the mist front by themselves. yet didnt get a single contribution. imo opression of ppl = resistance and it must be violent
Faced with Uchiha Obito and Uchiha Itachi, who were about to unleash a slaughter, and the Konoha leadership watching hungrily from the shadows…
Night of the Clan Massacre: Leading the Uchiha to Defect from Konoha!
漫画同人 · Euridome
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original The Hyuga's Saga
A man gets a second chance in life, He soon learns that he has been reborn into the Hyuga clan, one of the most powerful clans in Konohagakure. However, something is not quite right . this is my first story so please be kind , I welcome all critique2 Chs 25 收藏
wtf is he redeeming himself about? a mercenary village opressed his clan for decades then when they fought back they got genocided. kids women elderly civilians. and in the end all he did was kill 1 of the many who massacered his clan. so what is exactly his profound crime that you decided to translate such a stupid ff
Sasuke Path to Redemption
漫画同人 · Michacal